Hello
Its my newest track all feedbacks really welcome

Mane - Spring (save target as...then unrar)


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greetings

Lukas

Man, your clap is on the first beat, not on the second. you'd better change that, it makes you dance arythmic.

Melody has no logical flow. If you use a melody people must me able to play it inside the heads. Build up can use some attention too. Keep listening to the pros, and count beats in every part...

Hope this helps.
Sounds are decent, try to work on the things above. Keep up!

All the luck!
-Jay

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thx Jay M for another feedback !!

hey, why i always get only 1 or 2 feedbacks per track?? they are really that bad???

i would listen, but like i pmed u, its too slow to download, no one can wait 40 minutes to download this song
go to the site i gave u and register
im telling u its worth it

Well if you want to get more posts, make sure you make the reviews too!

People get to know you if you give comments. They will comment you more easily. Or create really good tracks.....

Maybe that's easy for me to say, i like to review

cheers!

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You should definitely try to get hold of a faster host. I think the download was on for at least 30 minutes. You should also try not to upload it as a rar file, but just the mp3. If you have a fast host, and an mp3 file people can stream it directly in winamp which, at least I, find more convenient.

About the song I agree with Jay M about the clap. It just sounds weird. Percussion wise I think it needs more layers. I also think the kick has too much high end "snap". It's a tad too sharp. I'm not too fond of the melody. It just doesn't do anything for me, but that's often the most subjective part of a track. It's definitely not bad, but I think some things have to be sorted out.

Peace

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