Cool stuff !
Strings and pads are very very nice,and the guittar too. The leads are not bad for 112kbps. But I was expecting more "explosion" at 1:49.
I didn't hear the original. Did you use samples from the original or all instruments are yours ?

all instruments mine, i just got the midi file,
about the explosion, ill try to make it better, the track isnt close to done yet so ill add some more fx and stuff

Bit of a dark horse mate! Didn't expect this level of quality. Liked the other song you did, this is just as good. Sounds great so far. I'll listen again at home and edit this post with better thoughts cos these speakers here aren't the best.

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It's kind of muddy once it kicks off but I have to say I disagree with you about it sounding ****, at least for the intro - the intro portrays atmosphere beautifully. Can really feel the low end on some of the pads.

I'll be keeping an eye out for your stuff cos it's good.

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Last edited by BassAngel on Mar-25-2004 at 19:32

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Originally posted by BassAngel Bit of a dark horse mate! Didn't expect this level of quality. Liked the other song you did, this is just as good. Sounds great so far. I'll listen again at home and edit this post with better thoughts cos these speakers here aren't the best.

tnx m8, its not just ur speakers, the version up there is pretty *****

I really like the ambience in the track. Very dreamy atmosphere. I'd like to hear the 192kbps
If I was you I'd not introduce the kick this way. Maybe begin the share roll earlier but introduce the kick with the full volume and not fade it in.
Anyway,good effort you did here
Keep it up !

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Originally posted by Fractal I really like the ambience in the track. Very dreamy atmosphere. I'd like to hear the 192kbps If I was you I'd not introduce the kick this way. Maybe begin the share roll earlier but introduce the kick with the full volume and not fade it in. Anyway,good effort you did here Keep it up !

ill proly do that, because one guy also suggested that exact same thing
he said tthe beats werent good comming in quietly...

Hi Sunquest

Just got your remix. The synths here are pretty cool. Buildup is pretty ok and I like the twinkly effect in it, though it needs a finishing touch.

There is indeed quity some low mud, it all needs some EQ-ing and mastering. I'm sure you'll have a look at that. I like the guitar-synth-like counter melody. All sounds promising as it isn't finished yet.

Finish her off soon, there are other remixes waiting!

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i can finally post! hi im mike i made the original track. you can hear a sample of the original hehe:

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