Hey there it is! I PM'd you what I think. I think it's really great stuff. I wouldn't be surprised if this ends up on some Cafe del Mar CD

Keep this up!

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Thanks Jay, comments much appreciated! I've been producing a lot of chill stuff recently and really want to get back into the aggressive/melodic hybrid stuff again. Guess you just gotta go with what comes out though eh?

Cheers buddy!

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anon

This is some cool stuff, kind of a chillout . Still digging "Get over it"


Cheers,
EM//

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very nice , very very very
its the kinda song u listen in ur car while just driving (too bad i dont have a car)
i love the extra synth u got running over the guitar sound, starts in the beginning
i can see a york remix for this
keep up the excellent work

eternalMusic: Thanks man, so glad you liked that one, really glad man!! Still going back get over it when this album thing is done cos I got some really good tips for it. Cheers matey!!

Sunquest: Excellent eh? I'll deflate my head before I go home so I can fit through the door Cheers bud!! do you mean the string thing BTW? Thanx!!

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Originally posted by BassAngel eternalMusic: Thanks man, so glad you liked that one, really glad man!! Still going back get over it when this album thing is done cos I got some really good tips for it. Cheers matey!! Sunquest: Excellent eh? I'll deflate my head before I go home so I can fit through the door Cheers bud!! do you mean the string thing BTW? Thanx!!

i mean the sound that comes in at 17 seconds i think and it slowly goes throughout the song
really nice sound, melody

That's an acoustic guitar recorded live and fit into the song. It was the basis for the track really.

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How refreshing

the groove is kinda cool, and the Gut works really well, slap a nice Vox over it and, hey, its summer sing along time!

Good job,

Abs

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Like it!

How about going euphoric cheddar and something like:

Feels so good inside,
Got nothing to hide,
I'm in your dreams,
Busting at the seams,
We're a shining star,
We've travelled so far,
(random ooh ooh ooh's to fit)

Or perhaps poetic narrative:

(in uber-serious voice)
a man,
a darkened man,
a serious man,
deeply, slowly, reflectively,
his furrowed mind (ever building tune now)
slowly furnished with the thoughts of the day
(dude stood there with far-too-serious expression on his face, hair blowing in the wind, fade.....)

Apart from these little gems, I can't think of anything. But I have got a lay-dee coming round to do a bit of singing on Monday, this could be perfect!

Thanks Absynth, I think I may just do that!

Cheers matey!

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this is really nice mate. The bass guitar section at like 3:36ish could have used some beefin up though. The bass seemed really thin, it would be nice if that was heaps chunky.

Other than that, cool work, I really liked the piano at the ending too

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I like it alot, dont add vocal. good as it is. im gonna put this on and all my friends are gonna be like this is awesome and everything, and then ill just tell them where i found it, and they will be amazed. there is so much talent here on TA.

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