First thing I notice is the bassline, it's too raw, I don't really like it. Kick is some bad rip, maybe you should replace it by a good rip: ripped kicks rarchive thread
Percussion could use some more variation.

Track sounds pretty full, synths are typical for an uplifting trance track like this, so nothing new. I like the composition though, I like the pads, synth and the melody. It all could be EQ-d a bit better.

Your synth gives a nasty "release-sound" or so at 3:10, you might want to remove that

Nice effort, I like the idea and I hope I get the finished version soon.

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the guy above pretty much sums it up nicely. great effort and the potential is there, just a few issues to sort and yer laffin

great effort

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Originally posted by Jay M First thing I notice is the bassline, it's too raw, I don't really like it. Kick is some bad rip, maybe you should replace it by a good rip: ripped kicks rarchive thread Percussion could use some more variation.

Thanks a lot!

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Iz pertty gewd , except the kicks and the bassline... as said!

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really nice melody, really uplifting! gets me dreaming

Ok, my $0.02... I personally think that the bassline at the beginning isn't all that bad- it just doesn't entirely fit the song. But it transitions into the more uplifting bit well, so I personally don't have any problem with it. I agree with the comment about the kick though. And as said before, the melody is quite nice. Overall, nice uplifting trance!

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well done mate
nice melody very uplifting

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I agree with smrq about the bassline. It seems like it doesnt fit at first but once the bassline changes along with the melody, it does seem to be alright. But again, it could be more "bassy", I think. I disagree with some of the people up above though, I like the kick.
Youve created some nice syths and pads in this track. Its really quite nice. For some reason this song reminds me of Matti Laamanen's track, "Flakes". I think its your bassline and the kick and the bass themselves.
GREAT melody too. Nice reverb on it.
Truely an awesome track, Revolutionman. I love it.
The title is cool too.

Hollen

ps.. i dont like the ending

edit: i realize why it reminds me of "Flakes"... its because your bassline is almost exactly the same.

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edit: i realize why it reminds me of "Flakes"... its because your bassline is almost exactly the same.

Yeah! In Flakes the bassline is like D3 -> E3 -> F#3 -> F#3 (4 bars and each note for the whole bar) and in my song it's like A4 -> E3 -> F#3 -> F#3 -> D3 -> E3 -> F#3 -> F#3 so almost the same

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