Hi guys,
this is my newest production. The stream is 128kbps. Tempo 136bpm. Secret scripture-Lalin
I appreciate all the comments and suggestions. Don't be shy.
Enjoy
Lalin
Some real nice ideas you have here, i really like it. Nice waves in the track, great job on that. I love it when the beat kicks back in all of a sudden, when you think it's away for a break
Though i think you should spend much more time on the synth, fx, kick and percussion, because each on its own is very flat and simple. I hear all the layers and the buildup make amends. Fix it and you'll have excellent stuff.
Thanks Jay M. What do you mean by fixing the synths, percussion etc? Are you talking about additional layering or something else?
Thanks for the comments again.
Apr-30-2004 03:32
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Very nice fella , lovley break, nice synths, good structure overall. As Jay M said, you need to sharp the synths abit more, and work on the buildup abit more (extend it).
Nice work.
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Apr-30-2004 17:37
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
wow, very nice intro
really crystal clear quality sounds
nice synth coming in at 30 second
wow that synth at 2: something is amazing
its pure TIEsto old school
i looooove it
k now suggestions, in the beginniing add more pads/strings to make it fuller
and maybe make a longer climax in the middle
thats all i can suggest hehe
this is really good
i love it