Hi guys. Finished my tune! Still open to comments or suggestions tho as i will still be perfecting it over the next few days.
Sorry i know alot of you hate when ppl post low quality samples, but im guna post a sample of the track as 128 kbs as well as a full 96 kbs rip, just to be safe. So here they are:
Very good sounding overall, buildup is good too. Really like the ambient part at the start with the lovely seashore and dolphin sounds. Melody is excellent. Sounds you used as well.
Only complaints are the 64kbps sample which too far below 96 kbps but I'm glad to have a 128kbps sample. Plus the fact that it sounds a bit thin in the mainpart. A nice string at the background would be nice, or some extension in the percussion. Plus all the highs in the sound, a bit more mid would be nice.
i fixed the mid, see if that sounds better! if not let me know
I also made a 96 kbs full version instead.
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May-04-2004 19:25
broken silence
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: In a gear shop, somewhere
Ew sounds realyl really fuckin pro mang...really a great tune. The only critique i'd say before shipping of to labels is two things:
1) make a different edit so they have more choices, just slightly different arrangement, in a shorter 7-8 min tune.
2) add another melodic part either in the secondary mix or both mixes like a big saw pad or something to "set it off" for a more exploding type feel to the tune.
I know you can tackle both of these obstacles very easilly, and nuff said. Great tune. This will deffo be signed.
May-04-2004 19:39
Mike_Foyle
Two colours in my head
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Leicester, UK
i plan on making a club edit hehe. duno bout another melody, we'll see cheers again dude
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May-04-2004 21:13
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Simply love that intro, great stuff. Even its a 96k i can hear everything is eqed pretty well . punchy kick! The bass is alot better here than the first sample i heard. Loving the piano, lead is ok but out of my taste. Overall this is a fine track Mike, i just think it would be better if you cut it, 11:36 is too long for me. (11:36 needs alot of variation, which is hard)
Cheers good work!
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May-05-2004 06:30
Mike_Foyle
Two colours in my head
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Leicester, UK
i plan to make a 8 minute ish club mix hopefully thatll be my length solution hehe. ill post when its done cheers EM
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May-05-2004 17:07
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
as i told u before
amazing song
just perfect
gives me this feeling like im on the beach and its sunrise or sundown doesnt matter lol
just awsome
i love it
just about to start the remix
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
very very nice mate only thing that sounds a bit weird to me is that the bass is staggered and too slow for the tune, if you added another rolling bass in it would be immense, i feel as though tehre is a string or pad missing when it kicks off aswell
cheers dude yeah still got the strings to do hehe ill let ya know when its done. i dont think ill change the bassline simply coz im happy with it and i think its a risk lol. it seems to be the first thing ppl pick up on coz they like it, and i have gone off it a bit, but im not guna try and change it, i do see ur point tho. pad or string will be in shortly