i like the intro, at 14 seconds, sounds like it comes in too strong though. maybe less elements at that time.
percussion is sounding really nice though.
i like at 57 how that melody comes in
i like the pads you use in the breakdown
nice synths going there
good fx too
the build up is pretty good, maybe could be a bit more (for lack of better word) exciting, but its still good as is
this tune is sounding really nice, sounds professional too, you should send it out when you are done
good job =)

Hey, thanks for the comment!
Yea your right i need to soft the intro abit so it wont feel " strong ".
cheers!

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pretty good, kick sounds good bass is good, percs are good
nice background synth coming in
melody is Ok, its a little too simple, could use some work on it, and now after hearing all the sounds together id say raise the kick and bass volume
o and nice pads

good work, keep it up

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Thanks Ron! Gota phat up the bass abit

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Like been already said the intro is coming a bit too strong.

The breakdown is great. I like it a lot..


Just my thoughts...

yo mate

shakers are to loud bit

the vocal on the start, is not clear enough..

i like the break.

i still feel something is missing in the climax..a pad or string maybe

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Thanks fellas!
What Shakers Massive??

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Heya.

Bass seems to lack some lowend. You got kick samples right? You could try to give them a low oomph, which is a bit longer. Maybe with a low kick underneath it or so? This is a bit ploppy.
I'm not an expert in these things but it sounds there's a bit too much midtone in the whole track.
Overall sounds good m8, I like the fx in it and the tadtadtadtad sounds, they make it uplifting. Hope you finish this soon. Good luck with the exams

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Thats pretty funny you know cause the bass has alot of low freqs, what could be the problem? Anyway, need to work on the kick as well.
Thanks.

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Ok then it's the mid what's drawing too much attention i guess.... good luck with it!

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Really nice tune man, good work. The production is great, except for that echoed click-clack thing which sounds annoyingly out of place in the mix, hehe.

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