hey all
recently finished this tune with the delightful 'Liv Bramwell' on vocals

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/lewdmusic.htm

would really appreciate ANY comments at all

Thanks heaps

Fucking amzaing FX, digging them alot. I think though that you could make the bass abit deeper. nice melodys. Nice vocals! The transitions are abit harsh, too fast. This remminds me of Ian Van Dahl - Will i. Great vocal trance, i really enjoyed it.
Keep them coming.

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ya amazing fx.


kick and bass, need some low.
bass could be phatter.


the riff in the intro is cool.

the vocals sound cool.


the intro still needs something more, besides the riff, and vocal.

supersaw lacks reverb i think.

climax gets a bit chaotic, choose the theme and try to pann the rest or balance it.

its not that commercial imo, good tune, and the vocals are really nice, compliment for the singer

good job.

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thanks heaps for the replies guys, just havin a look a changing stuff based around on what you said now.. much appreciated

eternalmusic - heh was trying to steer away from the ian van dahl sound, was aiming for a more rank 1 kinda thing... but what can ya do..

massive84 - cheers for the detailed review, having a look at adding something to the intro now... struggling with cpu and fx channels though..

thanks again guys, very appreciated

nice fx indeed.. .maybe a bit too loud in the mix. Bassline needs more low-end, sounds rather hipass filtered now.

ah wait.. bassline changes now.. more low-end, sounds okay now
Those transition into the breakdown with the jp strings is way too fast imo. And i think this sound/melody type is a tad overused, but thats just me.

Vocals are nice, tho sometimes they sound too lofi and a lil bit out of sync.

OVerall a decent track, tho i would leave the jp sound out and choose something else (especially if you want to get this signed on a respected label).

I love it,im not very technically minded so cant comment on any areas of sound that i find niggly,overall i like alot!

Heya

Nice track here.

Vocal sounds a bit radio-like...?
Synth isn't that original, just a bit phatter would be nice.
Clap is a bit too loud IMO.

Apart from these points, real nice track m8!

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I like the percs! Bass is a little high, but its still got a nice feel. Nice FX! Vocal sounds cool, not like ian van dhal at all (not @ the chorus yet tho ) The bass after the breakdown hat introduces the vocal sounds a little disorted, but it could be due to me listening lo-fi. The build up synth is rather a nice touch! Whoa Strings are cool, but i need a little bit more attack. i can hear radio hear the lead synth sounds a little ian van dhaly, but better, and i like the vocals. Quality peak, the vocals are a mint touch.

I would love to have a shot at remixing this track man, its very nice!

well done

Alex

nice...this is good stuff. Like the guys said, a little bit of work is needed but other than that, it sounds very professional and you did a great job at having everything complement each other. I fixed a little bit the sound and if you don't mind, I can shoot it here so you can listen to it. I just EQ'd a little bit.

this is really amazing, the fx id say just lower the volume a little, because they cover the melodies at some points, besides that its really good, agree with jaym on the radio vox hehe
but still amazing
at first it sounds like trance, then in the middle it sounds like ian van dahl, but good stuff

PS: can i borrow ur vocalist?

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i like it...the vocals are nice...

i would make the bass stronger though...

Wow,

This is amazing. Brilliant FX & Percs work. Quiet Ambient in places.

Love the breakdown and then the chord changes after the vocal sample. Very nice.

Arp sounds nice in there aswell, expecting a big lead or pads soon.

There's the Pad, knew it. Come in a bit harsh. Could of blended that in lovely, rank 1 style.

Pad sounds lovely as a lead, bas sis spot-on, rumbling my foot on my sub. NICE!!!

Are and it all comes back, not sure on the vocal now. Might sound better without it, a dub version maybe. Nice synth at the end, tho you could really twist that up. Hats sound nice coming back, with a very very very nice snare roll. Like the lead coming in.Again, I love that snare roll before the beat comes back.Don't particularly like the clap now, needs a little more high end and snap on it, mayb a 909 clap on top.

Overall, I think this is v v good, tho some slight tweaks could make it brilliant.

PS. Put the tempo up a bit....

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