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Hey there.
That extra kick (first few bars) is a bit annoying, i don't think it works. Nothing really happens after that climax at 0:55, I would've put more layers there! Sounds are pretty good so far (2:30). Not too fond of the buildup, try to spice some things up! Getting a bit bored... ok there is something happening now, nice guitar there, peaceful melody and lovely (but cheesey) synth coming up. Though this one sounds a little thin in the main part. Track gets bored quite quick, m8s, play with layers and variety in them a bit! Hope you can sort these things out, got some potention in this one!
-Jay
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Last edited by Jay M on Jul-03-2004 at 17:39
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