I like the effects of panning with the melody and other elements makes the song pretty trippy...I feel like there's another element that could be added to the beats..like another high hat at a faster pace to kind of speed things up.

Love the bass saw though wonderful job with that.

thnx for the comment m8...i try to add some faster hi percs in the future.......

This is pretty nice!

It's quality alright, but it misses some real energy to become a great track. Melody is well done, kicks/perc and all aswell.
Good job

Hey there.

That extra kick (first few bars) is a bit annoying, i don't think it works. Nothing really happens after that climax at 0:55, I would've put more layers there! Sounds are pretty good so far (2:30). Not too fond of the buildup, try to spice some things up! Getting a bit bored... ok there is something happening now, nice guitar there, peaceful melody and lovely (but cheesey) synth coming up. Though this one sounds a little thin in the main part. Track gets bored quite quick, m8s, play with layers and variety in them a bit! Hope you can sort these things out, got some potention in this one!

-Jay

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Last edited by Jay M on Jul-03-2004 at 17:39

thnx for the feedback. we will change a view things in the upcoming days.