I like it! All of it! like your bassline, like your synths, your drums, that melody,...
Recommendations? Maybe you should enhance a bit the mids/high, boost a little the bass, and compress it. Make more present the open hat and... nothing else!

great song and great sound!

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Cool! thanks for your comments, I'll some of those fixes. In case anyone is wondering, the bass is a layering of two basses from my DX7II + a sub bass from Virus C + a fuzzy bass from JP8080. The DX adds a lot to basses from my experience.

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Pretty decent track m8! Only thing is it lacks bass/low end. The kick is present but could use more low. The bassline is hidden. Open hihats are a bit of a blurr, but that's ok (I prefer a clearer sounding).

Nice work, you got more somewhere?

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Sounds nice! Some comments:

1 - The kick needs more low as Jay. So goes for the bass.

2 - Nice buildup lead.

3 - The intro+buildup, takes too long, it gets abit boring after a while. Variate + add some FX.

4 - Wonderfull transition at the break.

5 - The break itself needs a to be phatter it sounds pretty dull and simple right now. Add a substring + panned pads or strings.

6 - Typical trance melody, not bad yet nothing special

keep working

Antonio.

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I really like that melody.

Update:
Stupid me deleted a bunch of wavs from that project, so I had to work using the entire song as a track, then add layers. I added a sub bass, sub strings, a low kick, and another layer of open hihats. Since I lost the actual project, I wasn't able to shorten the intro. After taking your great advice, my track is sounded A LOT better.

[It is late and I still have mastering and finishing touches, new sample will go here tomorrow afternoon]

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Very uplifting! Pure pleasure for my ears!
And always backup your projects

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I like the bassline, but it could still use some more boost. I don't really like your melody, it just seems really cliched to me. The song's pretty good, but you could stand to have a somewhat more engaging melody.

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plus
nice beginning
I like the darker approach
ok pads
u got a fairly good melody

minus
beginning is a little long
the first synth is getting me tired
there is to little happening until 2:30
dont like the percussions (too much in the background)
generally too boring build up until about 3:30
synths aren`t too good
the climax reach in 4:59 is very weak,

conclusion
Well this is not bad, it is just a little boring, very little happens, and the percussions are very weak, there is no drive in the song, everything sounds very flat, u got some nice effects.. I really enjoy the track after 7:46, then I think it is really good, excellent, but I think the synths are weakening the whole track I think, and u need to work on making the track more interesting to listen too.. but I do enjoy the datk feel of the track

It is not bad it just needs more work, it sounds very reasonish (correct me if I am wrong)

keep it up

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quote:

Originally posted by Subtle I really enjoy the track after 7:46, It is not bad it just needs more work, it sounds very reasonish (correct me if I am wrong)keep it up

after 7.46. well, at least you like the last 45 secs... I did not use reason. Actually, I used Sonar 3 and hardware synths. Shame on me for making these high quality synths sound like software.

Well the link at the top now goes to my newest version, w/ bass added. After I cry for a little while, I'll start a new track. I'll apply some of the things I learned from you all.

(me thinks to myslef)-"I am improving, some people like it, I like it. keep going, dont stop now"

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nice job man.

more lows. more highs. more punch.

;p

wait for tranceproduction.com

it will help you ;p

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