Hey,

I've come up with this using FL and wanted to see what you guys thought...

Basically, I've had the melody in my head for a while now, and like it, tho I really want to put full effort into my next production, and get it finished & mastered, SO.......

Alpha Concept - Evolution (32 Beat Sample) HiFi Stream

Alpha Concept - Evolution (32 Beat Sample MARK 2) HiFi Stream - UPDATED

Do you like the melody? Kinda cheese, but thats the intention. Something a bit mroe mainstream.

Also, what do yuo think of the bassline? If it goes down well, I'll carry it on through the finished track.

Anyways, ANY comments are appreciated.

Also, the sample is only 32 beats so won't take long to have a quick listen

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Last edited by ManTrance on Sep-21-2004 at 20:46

i like!

That sounded pretty good, how did u get the bass to sound like that, like which effects and synths did u use to get that kick ass sound.

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lead synth sounds annoying, eq is not good. Its kinda boring, just your average euphoric attempt.

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Originally posted by sisterbliss i like!

I take that back. Usually people have a problem with LP filtering everything...this seems to have HP filtered everything.

Percs are horribly drowned out. Bassline is too thin. Melody is also too thin. Take off the HP filter on the melody and add a lowered octave on the bassline, run the percs through a compressor, and post up a sample again.

CHEERS FOR THE COMMENTS GUYS. COULD YOU PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTIONS?

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DJ PYSTER - That sounded pretty good, how did u get the bass to sound like that, like which effects and synths did u use to get that kick ass sound.

I used a tweaked z3ta+ preset for the mid bass, going on an alternating two octave pattern,which all sub frequencies eq'd out, then applied some chorus and a slight delay to fill it out.

For the sub bass I used a tweaked albino preset, with only the sub frequencies coming through.

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MOTH - lead synth sounds annoying, eq is not good. Its kinda boring, just your average euphoric attempt.

Fair comment. Not your thing obviously. Why is the eq not good tho? Ive eq'd out all the frequencies that shouldnt be in there, or have I got rid of too much low end

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SISTERBLISS - Percs are horribly drowned out. Bassline is too thin. Melody is also too thin. Take off the HP filter on the melody and add a lowered octave on the bassline, run the percs through a compressor, and post up a sample again.

The percs I can undastand, spent about 5 seconds on them just to fill out the tracks. This isnt full production quality. Who do you mean that the bassline is too thin? I think I know what you mean for the melody lead, being that not enough low end is preset, I can fix that. Why do you think I should put in a another lowered octave on the bass? I dont really get it.

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The "midbass" has too much resonance. Subbass has too much color, just highcut. Lead synth needs far more low and less high. You can HP it but you need an LP as well. Kick needs more punch and low, just raise volume.

Melody annoys me a bit.

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Cheers for the comments JayM.

What do you mean by colour? on the sub bass? I have never heard of this terminalogy before. What freq would u cut off the sub bass

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Cut high/mid frequencies. Just leave the low freqs in, you could raise the volume of that a bit as well.

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this track has NO bass.. i suggest getting a better monitoring system.. sounds to me like you're monitoring on cheap $.99 speakers... u know.. the ones that came free with your computer

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Originally posted by ManTrance The percs I can undastand, spent about 5 seconds on them just to fill out the tracks. This isnt full production quality. Who do you mean that the bassline is too thin? I think I know what you mean for the melody lead, being that not enough low end is preset, I can fix that. Why do you think I should put in a another lowered octave on the bass? I dont really get it.

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Originally posted by alanzo this track has NO bass.. i suggest getting a better monitoring system.. sounds to me like you're monitoring on cheap $.99 speakers... u know.. the ones that came free with your computer

That's what I meant. I figured you'd know what I was talking about.

Believe it or not, but im using my 300 pound mini-stereo.

Obviously this is causing me a problem, think it may have too good bass response, so what I think is a good amount of bass, is actually nowhere near enough. Think I might go back to producing on my headphones.

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