Hi all!

It's me with another trance track, finally! Have fun with it.

] Yarune - Oblivion (Original) [
138 bpm | 9:20 | 256 kbps | 17 mb

Quite a download, but worth it!
Any comments more than welcome, thanks!!

-Jay

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oh, 1.01 reminds me alot on "for an angel"

hmm, so far so good imo, nice and clean.

hmm 2.19 that roll thing could be better imo or a different instrument.

i really miss some strings or pad in the break, that guitar thing gets very repetitive now.

melodie synth i don't really like.

I prefer horizon tbh, this didn't really do it for me.

there are nice sounds in it, especially the background sounds, but it just lacks things to stand out.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Despite the fact that it occupies the high end exclusively, the lead synth at about 3:40 really seems overwhelming. They also sort of slow the rest of the song down a bit. The song wasn't really designed for speed in the first place, but it at least had a very driving pace when the leads weren't playing.

I like the song itself. It was a fun listen. I just didn't like your lead at all. Does that make sense?

plus
i like the different approach
the second melody is really great..


minus
I dont think that first melody really fits so well
i dont like the first melody at all

conclusion
the first melody is bad, percs are cool.. i like the primary riff,

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My favourite tune of the 7 or 8 TA tunes I've listened to today. This one's been on constantly for the last couple of hours

I really like this tune, I don't know how to describe its goodness, but I think it's got really good focus. Everything is there for a reason, the melody is great and it really takes you along with it.

Really nice work man, and thanks to you I've had a nice chilled afternoon here at work

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Yeah, quite a download. I think you would get much more listeners if you uploaded a 192kbps-version instead. Anyways, I've only got ISDN, which means I have a downloading speed around 8 kbps
Ok, I'm two and a half minute into the track right now... A break i progressing... Hmm.. Guitar is fine. But you have to fade in some HUGE pads at 03.16. You can't just slowly bring that melody in. It's too boring and predictive!!! And the buildup before the takeoff is also boring. The bassline is way too loud in compareance with the melody. The percussion is very weak, and you need to fill the whole thing up with much more hihats and frequenzies. I also can hear that the clap you are using is very short... Or are you using a clap?! It's unnoticeable almost...

Sorry, after spending almost an hour downloading this, I was kinda dissapointed by your track, I have to say.

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WOW!!! :O:O:O
i seriously looooooooove the guitar melody, this is what real trance is, fuck amazing, make the clap louder is all i can think of now,
and the synth make it more sharper and less reverb
ok man, ill catch u on msn
im DEFINATLY remixing this baby!!!!
peace out m8

PS: what a bassline!!!!!!

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17 mb :P
nice background and bassline but i dont like persucion, sounds too plastic :P i would put some eg on main melodie , except these things everything else seems to be ok melodie is good but not great :P
keep it up

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Originally posted by Massive84 oh, 1.01 reminds me alot on "for an angel" hmm, so far so good imo, nice and clean. hmm 2.19 that roll thing could be better imo or a different instrument. i really miss some strings or pad in the break, that guitar thing gets very repetitive now. melodie synth i don't really like. I prefer horizon tbh, this didn't really do it for me. there are nice sounds in it, especially the background sounds, but it just lacks things to stand out.

Sorry to sound rookie but what does it means *imo*?
Thankx .
Kopi =o.

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*downloading*
*waiting*
*going to the toilet*
*waiting*

*listening*

i like the bass and perc play...
nice guitar (what made with?)
phazed sound is pretty good, imo
melody is quite good...perhaps add another sound to keep it interesting...
and as sunquest said: increase the volume of the clap..

all in all:
good work, dude!
btw: your horizons was pretty good, aswell!

Thanks for all the comments guys!! I'll put an 128 kbps up for faster dl.

Ill try to give the lead and non-hat percs somewhat more body, add more clap and climax-elements. Update available soon.

@ Sunquest: I'll have a midi ready for you to use soon, would be great to have some remixes of this

@ Mane: IMO = In My Opinion

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Productions:
Airballoon [Intuition] | The Book Of The Water | Sands Of Time | Terraphonic - Ad Hoc Havoc | Muse - Uprising (Yarune Remix)
Also visit my soundcloud and Twitter