Comments as I listen:

-Great atmosphere, love the pads and effects.
-Didn’t like the saw synth as a lead… cant really explain why, its just that its not dominative enough I guess. Maybe try sharpening it up abit and maybe adding something of a different wave form on top of it…dunno, just a suggestion.
-The melody is too simple, its also quite shot which makes it get repetitive after awhile.
-Sound quality seems to be pretty decent.

Well over all this aint bad at all, just don’t like that much saws in one tune heh…
Keep up the good work.

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I can't really comment the soundimage quality since im at work and im using cheapass headphones. *bleh*

Productionwise it sounds good, but i don't really like the "1 road buildup" ... it's so straight and boring. To be honest, it almost sounds as you are hammering the main melody the whole song through! I would get tired and bored out of dancing from this track defenitly!

By the soundquality of the song productionwise I can safely say that you should be able to produce something alot better and if you're out of ideas I would save this song to finish when you get some more ideas for buildup etc.

Nah I like the saw the way it is. Some eq-ing could help to give it more focus maybe.. Simplicity was meant.

Thanks dude!

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awesome sounding track man, id easily spin this. love the flow great work!! Very Uplifting im easily in love with it!!

Cheers GREAT WORK!
-Petro

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Originally posted by Petrogad awesome sounding track man, id easily spin this. love the flow great work!! Very Uplifting im easily in love with it!! Cheers GREAT WORK! -Petro

Thanks man, I'm glad you like it!!

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hey jay
nice melody, but ur kick and percs and bass could be better, this sounds a lot lower in quality compared to ur yarune stuff
when it all kicks in, the melody, its real nice, enjoying it
just some sound issues imo, but i could be wrong
good work
take care m8

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good work jay like those synths, and the track chugs along nicely nice energy and power, agree with sunquest thou it is lacking some percussion in parts.

good atmosphere and fxs also, i'd give it a spin anyways good work man keep it up

Yeh the percs ssem to drown in the synth violence, same for the kick. Will check that out.

Rest of quality is deffo better than previous tracks, but this lead is full and thats harder to mix...

Thanks m8s!

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good job on the percu/bass in the beginning. those vroomy synths could be better IMO. cool ambiance, nice and uplifting. i feel that there is some place for another mid layer of synths (acid ?).
i really like the melodies too.


great job.

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- Track begins with a nice drive
- Nice atmosphere, love the effects
- I like the track but there is one point I want to mention: you change a lot with your synth (that's great) but not with your percussion and fx, especially in the beginning.
I think that your track sounds more prof if you change the percussion from time to time (add an element, leave some elements)
- Good soundquality
- Track has a lot of energy, i like it.

Sorry for my bad english, it's not my native language.

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Ok guys thanks a lot!

It surprises me that everybody has something useful to say about the tracks, I learn from it quickly. Thanks for that!

@ Morpheus: Je engels is begrijpbaar, mag in Nederlands hoor als je nog iets bent vergeten

@ staticblue: uh another layer... I think it's gonna be too full, i'll try to give some more body to e.g. the strings to fill the mid.

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