hello
this track was made on the spur of the moment,ive just been inspired by one track heh so here it is, it was made for fun so i hope you will enjoy it any feedback would be nice to read


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greetings

Lukas

link updated with few changes

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Last edited by Mane on Jan-09-2005 at 13:21

listening to while i comment

sounds good so far, but maybe lowering the piano just a tad bit, or maybe just lower it abit when it's introduced...

i like the little 'twinkling' sound fx in the background...

like the pads, the clap errrm i dunno not my taste but oh well ,

overall:

nice track 7/10
keep it up! cant wait till here more!

rj / space pirate

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thx for feedback, i loweredpiano a bitas you said and do few changes too, link is updated in 1st post

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the strings are really nice man!

Ya that clap seems not to fit here for my taste.

The piano in the intro, needs to be a bit clearer.

The braek with the other piano is really nice!, i like the melody as well, very relaxing.

that bassdrop seems to harsh, soft it a bit.

maybe some dreamy arp or something to add after the break and main part, it gets repetitive now.

nice fx usage.

Enjoyed the track nice one.

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listening:

dark atmosphere, nice strings.. not my cup of tea though.. too little happening.. a little repetetive.. but i like the mood of the track though

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Really nice distant pads.
Nice atmosphere.
Nice and laidback. Piano sound is good.
Nice twinklings and fx.


But...
Kill the clap! Use another sound.
The melody is not catchy at all, I'm glad I can't get it in my mind, cause I'd do anything to get it out. The paino melody doesn't make sense. It's playing too much and too low as well.
:mad

So in other words, keep the sounds, ditch the melody and the clap!

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thx a lot for feedback, Jay M ok i will do that

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i like the bass in teh beginning
the bongos have to much reverb, or turn down the room size, the clap doesnt fit eihter like jaym said, hehe. nice pads though. the piano sounds really low, and i cant really decifer it too well, seems like it has way too much delay on it though. there is something weird about the melody, its alright but there is somethign wierd i cant put my finger on. overall it has great atmosphere and i like the tune, just those stuff i mentioned try fixing them up =), good work

nice track!

deep and chilled! that´s what i´m talkin about!!!

very very very chilled

can't say much more because i'm way too relaxed to type anything out

good work

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thx that was my intention i see the melodie is a bit average some like it other dislike

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