Hey,
Listening ... I liked more your last track, this one is really not my style, is bored imo, sounds like one of those long long remixes you listen at the radio stations but that's just me :P, sounds fine though.
Kopi =o.

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thanks for the comments kopi, really apreciate someone taking the time to coment, if you dont have time just listen- if you feel compeled to coment thats cool.

Yo.

Nice fx at the start and I like the kick.
Slowly more percussive elements enter, quite nice to listen to. A bit minimal this all, but it goes well. I like that offbeat clap you've put in there, gives a nice swing.
Break now. The voice is a bit dull, has too much low end imo. Hm that synth isn't really my style, a sine lead would be better here I guess. More saw later on, not my taste again. They take too much of the room..

Apart from the synths in there it's pretty good. When you put more background synths in there, and sines, little bells and stuff, I think you'll get more of this progressive feel. Keep up!

-Jay

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whoo, jay- thanks for the feedback, haven't really gotten any real feedback from what seems to be - "the clique" aka Jay-M, alexpea, RickyM, Sunquest,Icone, and all the other semi-pro producers in here....

I like the imput, I tend to agree- but i didn't want the song to sound like everyone else/predictable instrumentation....

cheers