HI!
This is my new song Lovely Desert Rose. It's dedicated to my lovely woman Ania [_*DeSeRt_RoSe*_]
I hope that someone from this forum will like this song

Tom Deelay - Lovely Desert Rose

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Last edited by TomDeelay on Apr-14-2005 at 15:43

wow, i cant think of any negative feedback, this is a nicely made tune. great lead, good synths, sounds professional.

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- everything comes in too suddenly, but maybe thats what you're going for anyway, or i have been listening to too much prog
- i like the overall sound of the breakdown
- the melody is nice, but seems to be like anticipation to a stronger one
- during the beat, this particular melody seems a bit empty. maybe add more synth work in the background
- nice, soothing melodies at ~ 5:40, maybe thats what i was talking about above
- as a whole, the track could use more interesting structure variations
- mastering and the mixdown seems pretty good, but i have really crappy speakers so i can't really say much
- throughout the song, add some sort of fx theme to give it some variation and contrast
- bass should be more prominent maybe?

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Thanks for this opinions Maybe the song is not quite expanded, but my computer hadn't enough power to add new instruments and in the main that is the reason of too small number of instruments in background in this song

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Really like that, I do agree with all of eulerfx's comments to some degree (apart from the first, but that's ultimately going to be down to taste), although i think in this context they're not significant enough to stop this tune from getting signed.

This is the kind of thing I'd play quite early in a set, maybe as the first melodic trance track i play (until that it tends to be jump up drum n bass... that was a joke).

Excellent effort and good luck with labels

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In the future, make sure to only use high quality samples. I recon your cymbals aren't THAT good Everything comes too suuden, as someone else said.. Oh, here's a break!! Nice sweeping pads. Overuse of effects, imo, during the melodyfading. Nice melody btw !!! There's lack of power (bass) in the track.. I liked the melody very much!

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Very good production! Wonderful trancy atmosphere inside...

Nice melody



Great

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first impressions: wow?

sounds pretty pro!

Loving the effects in the begining, love how it slams in. Anti-prog w00t!

Loving the pads in the background. Very cool sounding.

Melody is good as well. Harmony is nice as well.

This is really good man. A very Solid Globe sounding synth, at around 2 minutes, loving it. Like the panning.

Shit this is really good. What more can I say. And no vocals! +1!

Great stuff.

EDIT: lots of effects and suddeness are awesome-o imo!

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Thanks for all comments it is nice to read all this opinions... very nice

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woot great track

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Nice full track here. I think the equalising needs more attention, the kick drowns a bit in the mix, because of all the low freqs. The bass should make some room. There's some string in there which has a lot of low end too, mix is a bit muddy because of that. And I think that panned lead has a great sound, but I'm getting dizzy from hearing it then left, then right.. center please (or just a little movement to and from both sides)!

Nice short plucky saw in combination with the driving hats and short clap, keeps the tempo high.

Good job.

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Hi Tom!!

Nice track, you step in the good way of trance!!

Keep it up!!

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