Hello fellow producers,

I wanted to post this track i've finished half a year ago or so.It's a kind of tech-trance track, not something i produce often. I really want to make the track better. Maybe you guys have got some comments on how to make it a floorfiller
Please open the file by clicking the right button and then save target as, because otherwise it won't work. (lycos)here's the link:

e-minor

looking forward to your comments.

Greetz,

Sebastiaan

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Last edited by six senses on Jun-15-2005 at 14:19

The first thing that stuck me about this, was the high quality of the mix. Everything gels together as it should.

Having said that, it does suffer musically from a lack of direction. The main lead is fine, but monotonous. There are no motifs to answer the lead and relieve the tension. It sounds like one very long build-up. Maybe two extra elements and little change in structure and I could easily see this on compliation CD.

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Originally posted by Dave West The first thing that stuck me about this, was the high quality of the mix. Everything gels together as it should. Having said that, it does suffer musically from a lack of direction. The main lead is fine, but monotonous. There are no motifs to answer the lead and relieve the tension. It sounds like one very long build-up. Maybe two extra elements and little change in structure and I could easily see this on compliation CD.

thnx mate for your tips. I'm going to try to put in some more elements. like a second arp melodie or something. Maybe you've got an idea on this. Maybe some chordchanges in the track? and maybe a better build up?

thnx for the comments already

greetz,

Sebastiaan

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Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

This sounds very full and the low end really feels good. Nice hardtrance production, will do a good thing on the dancefloors in holland. Maybe some more extra fx with the lead or a stabby other synth to hook it all up.

Good quality!

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Sure, for example at measure 69, you could vary the lead over 4 meaures by say rising a few semitones and at the same time playing an arp counter to that. Standard stuff really.

honestly, im not really into techtrance, but this is very good sebastiaan, quality track as usual from you

as you mentioned, try adding another arplead to the track to make it a bit more interesting and it should be a floorfiller

respect mate, good luck with the track,

looking forward to our collaboration

Peter

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wow really nice ron van den beuken stuff great man! quality is good!
only thing that i don't like is the melody..

-Renco

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your stuff continues to impress me mate, id love to get some stuff off you at a decent bitrate

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Thanks mates for the comments. I know i have to do a lot on this track, but i really want to give it a decent try so thanx for the tips so far.

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Originally posted by Luke Terry your stuff continues to impress me mate, id love to get some stuff off you at a decent bitrate

2 Luke. Thanks for your kind reply. Maybe we could chat on msn. It's a more easy way for me to send you some of my tracks. Check your PM for my msn adress.

Greetz,

Sebastiaan

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http://www.sixsensesmusic.com
Six Senses - Inner Thoughts Incl Peter Safranyos remix and Greenwave rework (Real Music)14/09/2005
Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

I'm enjoying teh track very much. It's got that driving hard epic sound I've been looking for lately.
-Alex G.

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Even at 96Kbps I can feel it!

Supreme mastering pal.You can feel the energy of the track very clear!Until the last min is perfect at all points (synths-bass-beat-atmosphere)and I suppose that you are thinking about how you will make the change.Maybe give a priority for 1 -1:30 min to a crazy beat and then...you know!You are the master

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psy tunes in the mix "psyunite"

a very well made tune, i'd go as far as saying it doesnt even sound amature in the slightest...

...although the obviously the major problem is it sounds like rvdb has made a new remix of something and this is it!

maybe you could make some sorta melody from those stabs (prefereably something evil as far as im concernd ) it would be good. you obviously have talent now innovate dont immitate

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