[Melodic Trance] Romi - Technological World (full version)
As promised the full version of my latest 'Technological World'. A trancer with a hard edge but also with emotional melodies (well, just the way i like them). I hope you enjoy it.
Well, everybody who liked it should have it by now, so from now on only a sample.
dun get me wrong, this is a damn good song, with this and "dream machine" you got me keeping tabs on your stuff ...but i'm going to nitpick to see if i can still offer some opinions.
at the 59s mark, right before the phrase begins, there seems to be an odd double kick...not sure if that is there on purpose but it sounds a little out of place.
when the teasing of the main synth and main melody come in at 1:26...can't quite put my finger on it, but it seems a little too sudden and obvious? after awhile it's ok, but at first it throws me off a little.
when the strings come in at 2:12, i think you could fade it in a little more...the attack is a little too strong.
other then this...i like a lot. the breakdown is a total killer. while the melodic structure of this is nothing like it, this song reminds me a lot of Kota - Waiting and the main synth in that. makes me think of "older" times when trance was still f*ckin' good.
good job.
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Aug-25-2005 21:25
richg101
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
oh yes! hit he nail on the head with the buildup.
i love this a lot. im wanting more..
i was so hoping there would be another break so the tune would come back again.. extended?
top quality tune and better than the usual epic style trance. id just extend by two mins or so.
i dont know whether this is uplifting or sad cos the melody is a bit of both.
original and top notch in my opinion!
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Aug-25-2005 22:35
Romi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thanks for the replies guys. And b i n k u n, i agree with you on the attack of the strings, it will be changed in the hq-version . I will send you guys a pm when it's ready.
i think this is a beautiful song. fantastic. the main lead is so simple and beautiful. however it does get a little repetative after a while. why not change it up towards the end a bit?
absoluteley love it. great work. thanks for sharing.
Aug-27-2005 14:40
Jay M
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Great sounding here Romi, nice full sounding with lots of edits and fx and uplifting swing on with the percs.
In the break maybe try to make the strings more wide and solid, would do them lot good.
Nice lead lead sound. Seems a bit dull sounding tho, seems to lack high end. Melody is ok, but lacks hook, it's as if I'm waiting now for another melody line or lead.
ahhh yes full version =).
great tune man. After a few times listening to it I got really addicted to the melody. (and believe me, that doesn't happen a lot these days)
w00000t!
keep it up man! love your work
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Aug-27-2005 16:19
Romi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thanks for the comments guys. I really apreciate it .
sweet...first to reply. 
...but i'm going to nitpick to see if i can still offer some opinions. 
. I will send you guys a pm when it's ready.
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