ok i hate bumping, but im determined to get at least one reply!

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Cool intro industrial type effects. Not a fan of the kick at all though, the lows on it are either way too low or simply not there, and I also don't really like that sort of stutter step on the kick (can't really describe it). Pads are really good, as are the effects throughout, but the bassline is pretty weak IMO, defintely not enough presense on it (changing the kick to something more substancial should help matters on this). Pretty nice sound on the lead, but there's this background bass type synth in there that's brutally out of key (first apperance of it is at 3:31). The highs are also a little harsh on those pads during the breakdown, hurting my ears a little in my headphones so try turning the treble down a little. The buildup is good and it'd probably be good when it dropped back in if it wasn't for the kick and bassline sound.

Overall pretty good, clean it up and you'll have a really nice track.

thx man, thats just the kind of criticism i was hoping for, nice and precise about wot should be improved, ill have a go at changing it and let u know, thx again!

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This song has some good strings, the lead is ok too.

I think you should give some more face 2 your kick&bass
It could be nice for this song to add some (volume to)hihats/percussion too, but that also might be a personal thought.

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