Hi guys,
this is my newest production. The stream is 128kbps. Tempo 136bpm.
Secret scripture-Lalin
I appreciate all the comments and suggestions. Don't be shy.
Enjoy
Lalin

Lalin

Some real nice ideas you have here, i really like it. Nice waves in the track, great job on that. I love it when the beat kicks back in all of a sudden, when you think it's away for a break

Though i think you should spend much more time on the synth, fx, kick and percussion, because each on its own is very flat and simple. I hear all the layers and the buildup make amends. Fix it and you'll have excellent stuff.

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Thanks Jay M. What do you mean by fixing the synths, percussion etc? Are you talking about additional layering or something else?
Thanks for the comments again.

Very nice fella , lovley break, nice synths, good structure overall. As Jay M said, you need to sharp the synths abit more, and work on the buildup abit more (extend it).

Nice work.

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wow, very nice intro
really crystal clear quality sounds
nice synth coming in at 30 second

wow that synth at 2: something is amazing
its pure TIEsto old school
i looooove it
k now suggestions, in the beginniing add more pads/strings to make it fuller
and maybe make a longer climax in the middle
thats all i can suggest hehe
this is really good
i love it

check ur pm

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