Too Many Dreams:
Kick feels like it overpowered a bit. Bass is penetrating, maybe it could use some fx too phatten it somewhat. The high percussionlike synth sort of thing is painful to my ears when it is cut away (too much res.?) Creates ticks around 3 mins. Nice synths come up in the break.. but when the kick comes in there nowhere all of a sudden. Compression problem?

Well these are some things i think you should work on. EQ-wise sounds ok, the synths used are nice. I like the clap. Overall not bad IMO, but sure needs more attention.

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hi am listening to Too many dreams

i like the dreamy riff, but the synth you using for it lacks for me.

intro is a bit repeatative

the break, i expect some dreamy pad , it's so empty, and it kinda change to a whole different song once the main lead comes in.

now technical things

your kick is good
your bassline is good bass it self needs to be louder
main lead is to soft, and needs serious eqing
your perc is ok

all i can think of right now

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alright, here it goes

The Attic isnt my type , id say raise the kick volume a lot, just some equalizing there

as for too many dreams, i gotta say, uve improved on ur kick in that song
the bass is good, beats are good, the song is very relaxing really, its nice and slow
in the third quarter i dunno if that clap matches there, its like its going kick clap kick clap with no hi hats in between, maybe lower the clap volume
also im not sure
if some parts in the main middle melody match the rest of the song but i dunno maybe its fine

good work

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