Hey this is one of my new songs.
Please give me some feed back.
It is called "stylus".

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/brianleemusic.htm

Thanks

Who are you?

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Im new to this site but not trance.
My name is Brian and I have been producing for a while.

Any feed back?
Please?

so, what's a while?

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since 2002.

Can I just get some feed back?

What software do you use?

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LOL JayM stop torturing the guy

alright skies, the song is a good start, i can see u just starting to produce or are at a few months? who knows, but its a good start if ur new....
the computery sound is too computery, no good
but keep workin at it, ull get there

peace out

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You know too that it's all about this.. I'm just making fun of the takers...

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Originally posted by skies since 2002. Can I just get some feed back?

You get what you give.

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"Stylus" doesn't really change throughout the track. IMO add some scary industrial sfx and change it up a bit....have like a breakdown in the middle and add a deep bass line.

Like someone else said it sounds to computerish - cheesy. Also, if you're going for a non 4x4 beat in the track, might as well make it more interesting, or at least change it up a bit. I myself am not the master of a good beat, but I think I cant tell what sounds ok...

Otherwise it sounds pretty good, like its leading up to something nice and heavy.

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Ya, I tried to add some techno elements in it to see what a mix of techno and trance might be.