This is a slow trance tune, with a chill feeling.

been a while since i composed something..and the chord freaks mite hear something out of sync hehe , but like how this turned out, really cool.

Made in reason 2.5
136bpm
192bitrate

Link
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http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=9986

hope you like, it's not floor killer, just something to listen

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

still getting better by huge strides every time i hear summat by u mate percs need upgrading + some more adding, and a lot of the elements are good but need beefing up and some other things going on perhaps, great fx + melody tho i bet u could make the bassline a killer if u get it thickened out a bit

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indeed a chilling track
i agree with mr. Luke
the bass could be amazing if u thickened it up
just a suggestion in the middle like around 3:40 or something when its only the string, add more stuff to it, like fx or wooshes or maybe add another melody or/and synth
u gotta make it sound really full

good work, keep it up

peace out

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Hey m8

Bass could use more presence. You got some nice fx sounds in here. Melody does quite catch me, the main lead oculd use more layers and phatness. Buildup is good tho. Biggest problem now i guess is to add some more layers to fatten it a bit. Overall you've made progress, and this one is nice to hear.


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intention was just a chilled tune, nothing heavy or something.

next thing il try to make something heavy i guess .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Nice tune, I like it.

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Originally posted by Luke Terry percs need upgrading + some more adding, and a lot of the elements are good but need beefing up and some other things going on perhaps, great fx + melody tho i bet u could make the bassline a killer if u get it thickened out a bit

Have to agree with this.

Already told you what i think of it on MSN .
This is really out of sync !

Just hacking on ya, very chilly indeed.

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sounds nice, like the ideas going on, though it all sounds kinda thin.
agree with luke on the percs.
but enjoyed listening

john

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i like this simple repetitive style, sticks in my head

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probably just me but i'm struggling to find ya tune.. is there some secret link on that page or something

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Originally posted by Lew.D probably just me but i'm struggling to find ya tune.. is there some secret link on that page or something

ya its you

just click on the link on the first post, and download it, 2 buttons download and play in blue.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose