hey all,

finally found some time to make music again. hope you like it

Clear Sight - Sunshine

feedback is much appreciated

john

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Count me very very impressed.

es

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not bad
the melody has lots of potential, u just need to work on some notes, and just a not on the bassline,
as for mastering, u have to fix up a lot of stuff, the kick is too quiet i think, the percs are fine, the bass has to be sharper and louder, the synths sound too reaon-ish / computerish, but its all definatly fixable
the structure is really good, pro stuff, just the mastering...

good work keep it up

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The kick is too quiet and I don't like the clap but otherwise this is a really nice track. It's got that typically chilled Ibiza feel, hence the title I imagine? Perhaps a little more variation would give it some legs though. Top job, keep it up.

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yeah work on the drums & mastering. Otherwise its pretty good

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Pretty nice.

Gotta agree with others that the kick needs something.

hey john,
I agree with sunquest; the synths sound too reaon-ish / computerish. nice guitar. good job, keep it up!

Renco

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Hi John,
This sounds like a Ibiza-kind of track. I like the main idea. I like the plucks/arps, and main synth is abit too hard but thats a taste issue. Some extra FX/perc would be great. The kicks needs to be to be more punchy. Thats all, gota love that melody .

Cheers, good to see you back.

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Pretty nice track. Good melodies, but i think you could work them out better. It's a bit basic, but absolutely not bad!

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Hey John,

Percussion is quite cool you got here!
Bassline is a bit too simple and too loud when it comes up first.
I like the synths in the first part. Don't like the clap tho.
The melody in the break isn't really my cup of tea i guess, the guitar doesn't take me along at all.
After that you got some nice things going on, synths and all, nice composition.
I'd check the levels once more if i were you. Some synths are a bit too loud, others too soft.

Nice happy feel overall, keep up!

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Originally posted by Jay M Hey John, Percussion is quite cool you got here! Bassline is a bit too simple and too loud when it comes up first. I like the synths in the first part. Don't like the clap tho. The melody in the break isn't really my cup of tea i guess, the guitar doesn't take me along at all. After that you got some nice things going on, synths and all, nice composition. I'd check the levels once more if i were you. Some synths are a bit too loud, others too soft. Nice happy feel overall, keep up!

ya i agree with most of what you said

bass didn't really do it for me, perc fit very well.

melody is ok, liked it a bit.

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Like the mainmelodies. Maybe the kick, as they say, is a bit to low. Even the guitar, which I think is really nice in this song!

Otherwise I think it's a great tune!

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