Hey,
We would still like some feedback from some pro's if possible.
The song seems to be doing really well but we would still like some feed back, thanks.
Solar City

Neat ideas here...but seriously needs some mastering work. Hard to appreciate your arp work with the clustermuck of un-EQed sounds!
Literally not much happening here on the whole... my ears feel deprived. Lack of mids and clean highs. The only sound besides the bassline is that dirty synth. Nothing wrong with a dirty synth, but by itself it doesn't work... try adding some acid like effects and have some more ambient stuff happening in the background...preferably in the frequency range between 240 - 1,175 Hz to give some life to this.

edit: Listening to the other song, I have to tell you. You're work is only 1/3 finished. Seriously... MASTERING!!!!

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Thanks for the tip. _
Suprisingly "Transit" is doing well with the public.

loads more work needs doing to this i would say, the sounds seem to be untouched, there is very little treble at all. and the phrase transitions are FAr too basic. I think all in all, add more, eq it, master it, and try something a bit more original. I would say this is far too basic and shows no real musical technique i dont think. the bass is also extremely basic, and i have to say i got very bored of the sounds. its also far too short to be used properly in any sets or anything. it kinda sounds like gameboy music Keep working on tracks, and try some of the suggestions above.

what do you mean its doing well with the public?

mike

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Like the others said m8, needs mastering and all. Try to review some tracks, you learn a lot from it.

And I'd try to please some other public, I mean I don't go nuts with this. I don't know what kind of public you mean...???

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