Some comments...
Percs sound a bit flat (esp clap)..
I like when the strings come in, the melody really has some great potential..
When the arp complements the strings I can really see things happening here.. Thicken things up a little. The arp sounds a little thin. Maybe it needs a boost in the lower spectrum.
Overall the track is alot better then the original you showed me which shows you are really improving. This is great.. I look forward to seeing your progress!
Keep up the good work mate.
Apr-17-2004 04:01
alanzo
The Equalizer Womanizer
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Boston, MA
I fixed the problems you noticed TI2ance.. definitly right about them.. thanks..
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Breda, The Netherlands
wow, good quality sound here
I like the melody very much, the strings have a bit of 'pipebag' feeling they go very well with the arp.
still could use some mastering on the arp. (in the beginning)
nothing more to say here.
greetz,
skiz
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Apr-18-2004 16:16
Sirocco
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Originally posted by alanzo
feedback.... I.. NEED.. FEEDBACK!.....
why is phillip seymore hoffman in ur avatar and sig lol
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Jul-09-2004 04:11
alanzo
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Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Boston, MA
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Originally posted by Sirocco
why is phillip seymore hoffman in ur avatar and sig lol
haha.. other ppl say I look like Elton John.. but I think they're full of shit
kick is a bit weird, bass sounds a bit weak, could use more strenght.
i find the tune to fast, less bpm maybe?
i think the melody and pad are a bit to loud, but i ain't sure about that, listening on crappy headphones..
melody is nice .
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Jul-09-2004 16:12
Stories
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Location: Bethesda, MD
For the type of tune you're going for (I feel a heavy melodic trancer), I feel as if the BPM should come down about 5 or so... it's a tad fast. In the beginning, I feel like the the claps come in a bit too early, it sounds a bit cluttered. The main lead melody has potential, but I feel like it should come down an octave or so... it seems a bit... perky if you know what I mean.
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Jul-09-2004 23:01
Jay M
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
A bit fast I think. I'd use another kick, or lower it a few notes. It all sounds a bit thin, try to put some chorus over the synths or so. When it all comes together the whole sounds pretty uplifting and not bad at all. Kick and synth need improvement tho, IMO.
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