Hmm before i give the link, this has no outro because am wondering few things.

First i thought the intro is good and nice, but the second part seemed not to be flowing (maybe it's in my head, since it's all the same just few extra melodies on the beat)>

Also how does guitar sounds?, should i extend the main part? or just start building down, should i actually finish this?

ignore the extra synth at 5.49 don't think it fits, but i cba to export again, takes 30 mins ...tips are welcome or ideas, my cpu is red btw can't add alot of more things.

Link

http://fahad.johnsteenbergen.com/Su...ve%20Remix).mp3

hmm not sure if you can hear the original back lol.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Last edited by Massive84 on Sep-28-2004 at 19:05

Hey m8.

Buy a new pc

Nice wobling fx over those percs. Could use some synthlayer over it, like a pad or so. But I guess that'll be hard.

Ok there are some nice sounds later, really like it so far! Great ambience. It all fits together. Dont know what synth you're talking about, cause it all sounds really nice.

Just give it a nice ending and it's finished. Maybe add some volume to the pads. Here and there some fx. Great chill proggy track, thumbs up!

-Jay

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Originally posted by Jay M Hey m8. Buy a new pc Nice wobling fx over those percs. Could use some synthlayer over it, like a pad or so. But I guess that'll be hard. Ok there are some nice sounds later, really like it so far! Great ambience. It all fits together. Dont know what synth you're talking about, cause it all sounds really nice. Just give it a nice ending and it's finished. Maybe add some volume to the pads. Here and there some fx. Great chill proggy track, thumbs up! -Jay

yes everything builds really slowly, i love that tbh.

pads more volume? ok. thought i keep them as background.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

I like it! ..but
Maybe u could add some more fx in the beggining of this song.
Maybe the guitar-sound could use some more work.
Otherwise, this is great tune! The overall is really good!


Good luck!

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ok tnx , hmm the guitar could you describe what it need? like more volume or space? i feel it's not perfect either.

or is it just how it goes with the tune?

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

i think there's something wrong with the percs, the offbeat hat that enters at like 2:55 annoys me a bit like it seems to clash or something, but except from that the track sounds pretty good, excellent atmosphere.

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hmm the perc didn't bother me that much.

Ok i edited my first post.

Full tune with outro 256, 17mb file.

have fun. i quite like this.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

not my cup of tea, but pretty kewl prog chillout track
take care
ur pal, Sunquest

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Originally posted by paranoik0 i think there's something wrong with the percs, the offbeat hat that enters at like 2:55 annoys me a bit like it seems to clash or something, but except from that the track sounds pretty good, excellent atmosphere.

Totally agree

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ok changing it tomrrow..many people hearing this, wonder why i couldn't :S.

sleep time.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

well, I've somehow managed to miss the original.

This is the stuff I like.

Really like the bassline. The guitar needs to be more upfront I think..

Last edited by Thunder5 on Sep-22-2004 at 06:59

this is nice, certainly in my taste, nice progression of the song and all, and yeah, great track, cheers

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