hi everybody, the sample I posted before is finished now, thanks for all the great comments about it =)

gunna think of a name when I think of the lyrics

this will be the instrumental version - although I'm thinking about changing the lead completely, as it may be a little old school (as some of my respected producers have affirmed to me =) - tell us what you think

I'm working on a version with vocals, which I'll post as soon as it's done, but in the mean time, be as critical as you like, cause it needs tweaks:

http://optik.real-t.co.uk/optik_wia...rvocalpromo.mp3

many thanks in advance

optik

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Nice intro... Like the buildup.

The synth/bass that came in at 0:54 should be beefed up a bit

Like the breakdown at 2:50: those pads sounds real good... Did you program those or you used a sample?

That synth at 3:26 is building the heat up good...

and...

hmmmm... lacks a bit of drama... No splashs, no crash at 3:50... I was waiting for something harder...

Nice, I like that part 4:32... Now that's what I was waiting for!

Change at 5:00 is really drastic but don't ask me why; it really fits good in there! But I coulda used more of that melody... Maybe make it going on for another 8 bars?

Good outro.

Really nice job overall.

Peace bro (I'm saving that one on my harddisk )

Trancefered (a.K.a J Logic)

cheers matey - tis all programmed, no samples (well, the percs and drums are layered 1 shots...)

in the vocal version, the vocal comes in at 2:45 - but I really should do something else with that section, as this will be an instrumental version

vocals will be through to about 3:20 in the final

appreciate you time sir =)

opo

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hmm
call it garbage
hehe just kidding
ur mastering is excellent as usuall, even for 112 rip hehe
build up is great, now the climax i hear u add another synth, u should definatly add that synth in the first 2 minutes building up, because its not good when it comes by surprise, but ur melody is good, very catchy
hope the vocals work out,
peace out

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Hey man...I like this a lot....very good quality, perfect synths, good fx and very good melody. Keep doing this amazing work up.

cheers Sunquest and BuRoLovesTrance =)

much appreciated =)

this has had about 35 downloads from here, please just tell us what you think if you listen to it - comments really help, even if they are small ones - so if you don't like the kick, please tell me, I won't be offended =)

cheers

op

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Got this already m8, usually I listen a few times before I review (if it's quality)

At start, the kick is a bit confusing... but you just need to know how it flows.
That low square sound is a bit too simple i guess.
First coming lead is a nice one, my kind of sound. Could use a tad of verb to create a little room.
Percs have a nice swing, I like them. Uplifting tune so far.
Nice pads in the break. Ok lead is coming in now.
Very uplifting, i think it could use more phatness, like some phaser maybe, just to fancy it just a bit. and I'd give it a tad more high presence.
Energetic tune! Produced very well. Sounds a bit flat and rawish here and there... but i don't really mind. Good work!!



-Jay

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cheers Jay =)

I think most of the points you made come down to the fact it's just a 112kbit (I think at least =)

I'll be working on the vocal over the next two days, so I should have a re-mastered version up with vocal shortly (but due to a little bit of RC interest, it may have to be a sample) - so I'll try some of the things you suggest =)

cheers for taking the time to listen and review =)

op

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this track has a real nice sound.. i dont like how simple it is in the beginning.. but the release is worth the simplicity of the intro..

what did u use for the main lead?

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I like it a lot! it sounds very clean.. Nice!

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thanks for listening moolow and alonzo;

the main lead is a JP8000 - which even though it's old gets a lot of use

thanks for your time, I really appreciate it - especially considering this track has had well over 100 downloads now and I've got about 7 responses from here =)

cheers guys- pm me with anything you want reviewed

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The main lead is really great