sounds pretty good for a hard trance
saws are nice too
that scrach sound you've got there is introduced too many times
i'd play it once or twice, its not that good to play it constantly like you do
but like i said, it sounds good so far

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Hey,
Listening .. Very powerful, I agree with megaman about the scrach, becomes kinda annoying.I liked the pads, they sound fatts and powerfuls, you could be listenign this at the radio good work :P.
Kopi =o.

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You really need to look at the eq of the synths, when they play I can't hear the hats or the pad in the break. I don't really like the sound of the lead either. And I'd remove the pitched vocal. Pad in the break is pretty cool, you should focus more on that.

I think it's better to post more finished stuff in here so we can get a better picture of your work.

Keep working m8.
-Jay

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thanks guys...appreciate the comments...
the vocal effect is cheesey...you're right...

i will post finished work next time...good point

later