Helloooo.

About finished with a new remix, decided to put up a sample for some feedback.

Here's the link to it - Surrogate Saviour - Radiance (Yarune Remix)

4:01 | 136 bpm | 112 kbps | 3 mb

Feedback makes me happy!

-Jay

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Last edited by Jay M on Mar-08-2005 at 11:55

peak, sounds good dude- i like the bassline very smooth, xylophone sounding synth is very sweet, i'm starting to use xylos more and more. I like how you bring the main synth/melody in- very proper fx. also needs more build elements here and there unless your going for a mellow feel.

PS. Feedback makes me happy too

Quality stuff mate =)

All the elements are balanced nicely. EQign is pretty good.

Love the filtered synth at 1.32. Buildup at 2.50 is quite restrained but it works well. You could take it a bit harder but maybe thats not the style your going for.

The track has a MIKE'ish sort of feel to it. Quite sparse but with some very powerful, subtle elements to it.

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nice stuff mate, nothing I can really comment on to make improvements as it is surpased my skills, only dislike I have to point out is the kick, it seems a little weak, could be because of the bitrate, but it sounds a little weak, I have the same problem when I'm not doing hard trance, I sugest trying raising the midranges slightly, dunno if it'll work, but it's worth a try :P
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Really like it mate can't wait to hear the full version!

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Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine

A+ work.

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Originally posted by State of Matter Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine A+ work.

Same here, great work .
Kopi =o.

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Yo, thanks guys, for the kind words!

@ State Of Matter: Did you receive my PM btw, I sent you the full of course..

Anyone else?

Chrs.
-Jay

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Yeah Jay, I got it. Wasnt aware you had sent the full though, I'll check it out again.

The link thing is no problem, I just gotta finally get around to updating the page itself. I'll do it later today.

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I don't like the first lead synth jay. It's to weak and noobish if i may say.

Gate on the background is nice.

i REALLY don't feel any drive, where is the huge bass? something like horizon?


i miss some emotion in the break jay.

Climax is good, but still no bass .


Imo fix the bass and first lead synth, this is quite good, just not good enough yet.

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Yeh, that first lead must be changed. Now. I'm expecting that it's just filler for now. It better be.

The percussive, flute-like synth is nice, though.

Eh, the breakdown is kinda flat. Spice it up with some high end percs or something. Hats, Bongos, anything.

I like it. Once you fix that lead and put some energy in the breakdown, though, I'll like it even more.