hi,

just wondering if I should contine with this tune, as im not sure were the hell its going or what it is!

-- RuSH -- (5mb .mp3)

thx

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Last edited by ichiro on Jul-12-2005 at 16:08

Gonna take a listen now m8

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Great intro.
That bass just kicks ass, what did you use to get that lovely thing?

Good sounds. Not too keen on the clap sound though. but minor comment.
Mystic intro. Really interesting.

Breakdown at 2.. Im on energy, want that kick. oh sweet melody at 2:20. Sweeeeeeeeet.

I'm going to send a message to Vicky about this. If she likes it she will do some vocals for you if you want

You got good skills my friend.

We should do a collab some time. Just for kicks

What gear do you use?

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Hey Ichiro,

Just listened to the sample of Rush. Unlike Drik on comment above this one I am not too fond of that bass, especially when it begins it seems to be in a wrong tone, it is out of place with the beat.

The clap is indeed not my thing either. It makes the track sound a lot cheaper.

Melodic wise the track does interest me, it has a good atmosphere and the lead sound introduced during the break is also quite nice.

Try to do more about the percussions in this track. Better hi hats, better clap and it might sounds a lot different. A nice deep reverbed clap could already make the track sound more deep and wide.

I would not throw this track away Just polish it a lot and it has potential to become a nice one.

Cheers!

Nomen Nescio

thx for replies guys, ive just completly re-programmed drums.

I gone for a more live sound. is this improvement?

-- Rush --

thx

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Hello ICHIRO

very cool intro.... very very very....nice percs...very nice....there is drive...but rock snare is LOL ....

why?????? everything is so good,and then snare like from clouds not to theme.... ....nice melody...but need some atmosphere(maybe a little bit pads in the same volume level )....nice nice work...

9/10

please review my new experimental trance track

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...013#post4705013

I listened to this yesterday but couldn't comment but now I hear some different sounds indeed. Snare is better, but could still be better. I get the live idea, nice experiment but you need more punch on all instruments to achieve that better. Kick needs far more punch.

Some nice sounds and atmospheric pads. I like the overall idea, tho I'm more fond of spot on Electronic music, without the in built tricks to make things live if you know what I mean Play live for live effects, is good too

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