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Klangzentrum
laidback'd&blow-job'd



Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld
Drunk [Sample] Phynn - Lucid [Klangzentrum's Deep Red Remix]

hey guys!

after a lot of learning for my exams lately, i´m finally back with a new sample!
it´s a remix of phynn's track 'lucid'...
but somehow i stuck at the point where this sample starts and ends...
so i'd like to ask you for some ideas...also some feedback about the sample itself would be cool....


Phynn - Lucid [Klangzentrum's Deep Red Remix] - sample

thx in advance...

// Lars

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Subtle
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Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Urban Shakedown

this is fcuking aweosome... i love it.. find nothing wrong with it.. except its too short though...

9/10


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Mane
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Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Poland, Szczecin

great bacground add more fx's and thats it everything else is really good keep it up

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Klangzentrum
laidback'd&blow-job'd



Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld

thx for your feedback so far, guys!

hope you´ll be content with the finished version, aswell, when it´s done!

anyone else wanna give some criticism on this piece of crap?

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Hanki
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Registered: May 2004
Location: Plastic City

It's great! But If I were You I'd change the bassline EQ a little bit + add some nice softy sounds to the background. But mainly it's worth listening, good work m8!


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sooper
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Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Toronto

Hey Lars..!

I haven't heard the original, but I'm really enjoying your remix. The steel drums give it a sweet vibe.

the f/x and atmosphere are awesome - you did a great job there.

lots of energy, and your percs are great. The hi hats that come in at 3:33 sounds a tiny bit dry.. maybe some reverb would help? Maybe a little variation in the melody would be nice.. but this track is pretty solid as is. Excellent work!!

Looking forward to hearing the finished track,
Trev


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Kenidel Lopez
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: PA

Enjoying what you have so far.

Try sticking a lower-pitched version of the lead in there to go along with the one you have now.

-Kenidel Lopez

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staticblue
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Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France

sounding nice mate! quite original sound combination too.


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Jay M
Connecting dots...



Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland

Hmm I get an overall feel of this which isn't bad, but not good at all tho. There's just no power whatsoever is this remix. The percs are very (and far too) minimal. The snare roll isn't too good fitting here.. it's quite chilling trance and a harsh drum like this doesn't do any good IMO. The open hihat is a wrong one I think, these are used in the 90, nowadays they're far more crisp and have less color. No extra elements are added to the synth layers of the original, you even tried to copy most of the synth sounds.. Now that's a choice you can make, but you can't make a chilling mix with the uplifting sounds of the original. I'm also missing a bunch of fx here to keep people alive. In the first minute e.g. there's just nothing happening.

Of course, the original is a great track and you got a good atmosphere in your track, I read the idea, but a good remix takes more than this..

Sorry to flame this down, but it just ain't that special as others posted.. maybe I'm just disappointed because of the unwillingness of my fellow reviewers to post negative criticism..


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Klangzentrum
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Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld

thx for the feedback, guys!

and it´s not a problem to flame on it! this helps a lot to get to know what's wrong with the track and to improve it! so i´m glad about any negative criticsm...
although i wouldn't call it negative, but helpful criticsm!

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Jay M
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland

quote:
Originally posted by Klangzentrum
thx for the feedback, guys!

and it´s not a problem to flame on it! this helps a lot to get to know what's wrong with the track and to improve it! so i´m glad about any negative criticsm...
although i wouldn't call it negative, but helpful criticsm!


Glad you see it this way, I hope it's that useful to hear your tracks improve in near future


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Klangzentrum
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Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld

quote:
Originally posted by Jay M
Glad you see it this way, I hope it's that useful to hear your tracks improve in near future


for sure it will help! i guess it will even improve THIS track...
and the mainpoint you post your tracks here is to get feedback! so why being angry about it, if somebody just wants to help you...

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