K here is the final version and the follow up of Violet Sun

Eulerfx i tried your ideas, didn't really work out, did increase snare volume and mid frequency area for more body.

Further i cleaned out the main part, tweaked the pads mixing for more breathing space

For now this how it is

Bpm 132
Made in Reason

Link
fahad.emphased-reality.nl/lofi.mp3
(please copy and paste the link in browser to get save target menu, tnx)

Looking forword for opnions

Fahad

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

First!

Listening...

Ok sounds like a great progressive set opener. Nice deep bass, great sounds. Bell-like thingy in the break seems a bit thin.. maybe just a tad more verb or some low end could help..

Good pads. The kick is maybe a tad too present, it's a trancy kick and breaks need deeper kicks IMO. The rythm of it doesn't feel right.. a silence and then two kicks following eacht other shortly.

Otherwise, really f***in' nice track Fahad, apart from the tiny things I mentioned.

-Jay

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Last edited by Jay M on May-17-2005 at 21:14

Sounds good, even if it's just 112kbps.
I have got no comments, except I like it!
Deffo a keeper!

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That clicking sample in the opening is cool.

Wow, that bass is wild. It's so far down the spectrum that I can barely hear it. Rocking, that.

I would try to get some bass an octave above the bass you have, though, so that it can be audible from time to time.

Otherwise, a very choice track. Good job.

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The bass is too deep imo.
Nice riff.
Great vocal sample.
The beats are great.
I think you should use more punchy snare/clap.
The lead is great.
Great track overall.

5/5

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tnx for the feedback

Ya was shocking how deep the bass sounded when i heared it on my mp3 in the train.

I got asked to make more clubby breakbeats , more drive and perc dont know if i wanne do that i like atmosphere more.

hope to hear more opnions

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Hey Fahad - nice work man!

I love your percs, they are always so funky and clean.

I can't really hear the bass.. but you're already aware of that.

Sweet break.. very soothing.

Great stuff.. once you make that bass a little more audible, you'll have a solid track. You are the perc king.

looking forward to more (especially some funky house!),
Trev

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