Ricky gave me a melody and voila, what i've managed to come up with so far. It's only a build and a break's worth so it's not finished yet. The title sounds cheesy as fuck so any suggestions (mainly looking at Ricky since it's his melody) would be appreciated.
Cheers, Joey.
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The Ocean - 128 - 4.43 - Uplifting Trance
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Sounds cool as fuck.
About the name for the song - I'm pretty awful when it comes to chooosing names, but I'll have a think .
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Jun-16-2005 09:30
Jay M
Connecting dots...
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Hm.. it seems as if there's some latency on the synths, like they're just a few ms. late. Clap is ugly m8. Yeah there's a lot to be done cause the synths are a big blur. IMO you didn't have to post it this stadium.
Anyways.. now I'm inspirationless for a title, maybe work the track out first...
I like your track very much. The intro is kind of long but the wait is worth while for some nice synths, imo.
-Alex
Jun-16-2005 18:17
alexpea
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Mosjøen, Norway
Inro is very boring. Even though you're trying to make it DJ-friendly, try to make it interresting as well
At 1.20 you should have introduced a new element.. Hmm... Percs stopped around 2.20... Unnescescary (did I spell it right, hehe) break, imo. Doesn't bring anything new to the track. There's supposed to come a melody after 4.30 I hear... But that's way too long buildup imo. Good try guys, but it didn't impress me though You tried to make an epic, energic trancer with lots of power, but you failed. Because I felt it was kinda flat, lifeless and boring. Sorry if I'm harsh... I'm just trying to be honest
Keep it up - I know both of you can do better than this!!!
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Jun-16-2005 21:27
JoeyEnv
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: England
^Alex man, thats how I want you to review all my tunes. Fucking hell, just let it out. Awesome.
0:01 - decent kick...
0:27 - nice acid sound, altough its little too loud
0:40 - poor clap, its dry... put some delay & reverb and increase the volume
0:54 - dont like the OH, its too loud
2:00 - the incoming synth is 'blurred' and sounds muddy
Overall:
- poor percs
- sounds flat and muddy
- nice FX
I think a melody form RickyM deserves a better treatment
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