It's me again with another track, a bit of downtempo trance. I put some more time in this one than my previous, but I feel it's nearly finished now so it's time for you to share your thoughts on this
This version is an instrumental dub and is full on it's own. The final will probably have a vocal in it, another title and bugs fixed.
Still, I think this is one of my best so far already. I hope you like it and place some reviews.
a nice slow groover
-when the sub bass comes in its really nice.
-at 1:01 its just lovely!
-guitary sound might sound better with some delay, maybe a tape delay
-great breakbeats
-break down is wicked
-production is great
-about the vocals, i'm not sure that it would need any. If any, just some little phrases, not full verses etc.
excellent song!! has a really great mood and feel, i really like this more downtempo style.
love the deep warm bass.
great percs.
nice high pads, reminds me of an 90s song: 'Seal - Crazy'
great beat.
3.20 love that poly & bass mix. excellent contrast.
4.07 shyerrr im enjoying this.
Really nice work JayM.
Xeno
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Jul-02-2005 03:03
Romi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Very cool laidback track. The bass is great and the melodies remind me of summer so that's allways good . I can hear you put a lot of time in this one. Good use of effects and you manage to keep the track interesting. Quality is also very nice. Good job neighbour!
hey Jeroen sounds really pro! love it percussion is awesome. great guitar. only thing is that subbass.. it s a bit distorted or something. melodies are very nice anyway i really like what you have done keep it up! i think it's your best track so far
cheers mate
Renco
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Jul-02-2005 13:22
Klangzentrum
laidback'd&blow-job'd
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Bielefeld
hey jay!
really nice tune you got going on with this one!
i love the bass! deep and clean!
i agree with some delay on the guitar!
great buildup...
break is really lovely...sounds like some asian music...
percs are very well done...
overall i really love this tune!
good job!
// Lars
Jul-02-2005 15:39
dannyc
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2004
Location: dublin, ireland
nice original stuff from you jay, bassline is great and also general atmosphere too. also like those asian type synths too, there is distortion in parts think its from the kick drum you have going.
all in all nice track vocals might also be a good idea
can't think of any complaints right now except for that the mastering EQ is kind of weird and honky... might wanna send over to a friend to play with it on winamp or Itunes and send you an EQx file back... or get it mastered by a professional.
Originally posted by gerrycueto
heh markus schulz sounding... cool
can't think of any complaints right now except for that the mastering EQ is kind of weird and honky... might wanna send over to a friend to play with it on winamp or Itunes and send you an EQx file back... or get it mastered by a professional.
Hehe thanks Gerry.. why don't you give me some tips on the EQ where exactly are the issues
If needed, this will of course be mastered by a professional.
sounds like it needs more low mids and less high (6-8khz) mids. like try to open up the midrange more instead of concentrating it on a couple of bands.
