I'm working on a new track. It's far from finished, but i thought it would be nice to get some respons and maybe some suggestions to make it better. Maybe there's also someone who knows a good title for this one. Here's the link:
- Pads sounds a bit... computerish
- That goes for the synth that plays this melody being faded in and out. Nice melody btw though!!
- Kickdrum should have more punch
- Bassline is cool
- The percs sounds a bit weak, but nice and stereo still
- I love the part after 3 minutes. Nice use of vocal-synths!
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Aug-13-2005 12:10
Jay M
Connecting dots...
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Nice atmosphere, very relaxing trance. No floorfiller tho, just nice to listen to. Misses a real hook in the mainpart, I'd suggest put a good lead sound on top. Percs are pretty good, but sound as if they miss the high end (10k+ for crispyness). Andy Moor-ish vocal stab is nice, keeper.
Some fx here and there, nice lead and done Good work.
the beginning before the beat comes in is very nice indeed.
you have a lovely moving melody here.
it would be nice if this track was a bit more energetic cos that melody could be peak time material if it was a bit more harsh.
as a more melodic chilled trance i loved it.
rich gale
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Aug-14-2005 15:20
NYTranceScene
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2005
Location: NY
Nice chords!
I think you should keep your lead sound filtered. Your leadsound sounds a bit to cheesy when you open the cut off filter. When its filtered it sonds realy nice.
The voice cut ups work well with the feeling of this track.
Work some more on your arrangement and add more drums.
Aug-15-2005 04:49
gr8ape
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2005
Location:
Cool opening(im writing as I listen lol) with the synth strings. Lead seems a bit too cheesy i dont know how to explain like some kind of weird brass. Nice beat, you could try boosting the high end eq of the hihats just a little. Its not finished so im be expecting some kind of buildup to a very powerful melodic peak, good luck on that, theres nothing flagrantly wrong about this track, good job
Aug-15-2005 05:45
lagrom12
Space Garden
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Diving Above The Sky
wow, romi i really like your style, another exellent production
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Aug-15-2005 23:57
Romi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thx for the reviews people
A new preview is now available. I tried to get the track a bit more firmer, still some work to do though. Same link.
Good work.
