Would love to hear you guyz comment on this short compiled-clip of my tune Ararat...

The clip is realtively short and in low bitrate for your convenience

Anything goes, thanks in advance

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Last edited by oDrori on Mar-29-2004 at 11:17

Nice job mate, I see you added some more new elements to this.
I love the melody you made there… the intro seems very cool as well.

The only thing I noticed is that the percussion is abit to simple, and that off beat open hat gets abit repetitive after awhile, make the percussion as variable as the melody and this will be even more awesome.

Btw, why didn’t you use my web space the other night? Was there any problems logging to the account?

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Hey there mate, thanks for the comments, I'll try to work on the percs... neglected a bit there I guess

Yeah the site gave me some trouble, but thankfully the other one I have got back online so it's cool

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Hi there

I think the kick and the clap draw too much attention, you'll need to look at the levels once again. Percussion needs some more variation/elements. I don't like the break either.

Melody is good though, so a bit more work on this et voila: nice track.

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hmm this sounds very nice, a bit like solar factor meets asot, rather original only complaint is that it sounds a bit thin in places, i can imagine this working well live. good effort

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Hey oDrori,

I agree with Jay M that the clap does draw a lot of attention. But I do like the clap. Its a nice crisp sound. If I can just reiterate what he stated that you should probably just check the levels and youll be fine.
One thing I dont like is the hihat. But thats just a personal preference.
I like your break but it sounds thin. Im sure you know how to take care of that.
I like the synth used for the melody. Its a refreshing sound. And I love the melody itself.
But if I could just rewind back a bit, the beginning moments of the song is real high quality dance music. Luke Terry is right about having this work live. I would love to hear this in a club, on a sick system.
Anyway, great work! I like this a lot.
Good luck with the rest.

Hollen

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Originally posted by djHollen Hey oDrori, I agree with Jay M that the clap does draw a lot of attention. But I do like the clap. Its a nice crisp sound. If I can just reiterate what he stated that you should probably just check the levels and youll be fine. One thing I dont like is the hihat. But thats just a personal preference. I like your break but it sounds thin. Im sure you know how to take care of that. I like the synth used for the melody. Its a refreshing sound. And I love the melody itself. But if I could just rewind back a bit, the beginning moments of the song is real high quality dance music. Luke Terry is right about having this work live. I would love to hear this in a club, on a sick system. Anyway, great work! I like this a lot. Good luck with the rest. Hollen

I'm considering working on a "Dark" mix which will mainly feature that type of vibe ... A remixer-friend of mine is also working on a mix which is focused on that... I myself am not that much of a "Dark-Trance" fan

Anywayz, that was heart warming Thanks a lot

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damn i like this track..
and the remix just ownz i love dark

damn first off
look out M.I.K.E. , the beginning is very nice, the kick is a little weak, id change the kick totally
nice breakbeat in the middle, very original
the ending, very unexpected (in a good way)
nice melody, very pumping track, id say its more relaxing than a club tune, but thats me

good work, keep it up

great jbe m8 ..!
very profesional work...

reminds me of Jurgen Vries

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Originally posted by KrazyDJs damn i like this track.. and the remix just ownz i love dark

Thanksh
U heard Oren's work yet?

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Originally posted by Sunquest damn first off look out M.I.K.E. , the beginning is very nice, the kick is a little weak, id change the kick totally nice breakbeat in the middle, very original the ending, very unexpected (in a good way) nice melody, very pumping track, id say its more relaxing than a club tune, but thats me good work, keep it up

I felt almost completely pleased with the kick... Is it really that weak?

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Originally posted by Origin great jbe m8 ..! very profesional work... reminds me of Jurgen Vries

Yeah, both "The Theme" and "Michael Woods - Solex" sprung into my concious at some point during the work


Thanks a lot you three

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