Hey- reposting this- I only got to read a few of em, so if you posted before I didn't get a chance to read

Well here's the tune

http://www.soundclick.com/omegaseven

its also in 56k at my dancetech page

http://www.dancetech.com/~broken_silence

Enjoy folks!

Link Fixed!!!

Last edited by broken silence on May-02-2004 at 13:28

ooooh nice, did u post this twice? hehe

i like very electric

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The 56kbps sounded promising so far. Please fix the first link!

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Nice production m8. I like the bassline. Kick and percs sound good too.

Don't like the low piano in it. In some way it seems that the voice is not part of the song, maybe because it isn't as powerful as the rest of your track? Stringpad sounds a little bit thin.

Other than that, no further comments, i'm liking this. Keep this up!

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Last edited by Jay M on May-02-2004 at 14:42

All fixed folks,

thanks for the comments so far!

thanks for the review mate

I updated the links just now btw- the vocals are louder innit!! plus a few little changes

updated...the 6th update lol, i swear this is the last one!

Writing this as I listen.

Don't like the vocals. Too much reverb maybe.

The bassline is solid. As is the kicks and percussion.
Nice breakdown.

The piano is nice though a bit too low.

Overall the track sounds fine, just the vocals are bugging me.

thanks for responding mang! and glad you listened

Well, I can't stand the voices The "melody" isn't bad, but I don't like it very much.....yeah, I know, that it's the main unchageble part of song, but I have to say it

I had a feeling....it was somewhere after 5th minute, that the song is in a loop Tray to listen to it carefully and focus on it

I think, I'll have to tray it in different mood.....it would be better for my ears than.....maybe

thanks alot for your suggestions/comments mate!

so...where did you get the vocals?

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yep... where did you get the vocals?

i'll tell you some things i don't like in this track:
it's main part (it is chilly melody and strings, is it?),
the harmony you used doesn't fit with vocals i think,
and more reverb than i expected...

from other side, track has a big potential...
i saw the equipment you used.. WOW...

i use only my pc and logic audio platinum....
btw, you can check my stuff:
http://www.chat.ru/~fruitypulse/Pulse-Lost_way.mp3


bye,
pulse