thank's john

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Heard this sound, heard that sound. Could use more detail to keep me awake. Composition is good tho. Sudden vocals are nicely brougt at 4:35. Overall very good job, good trancer!

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Pretty nice.

I think it is a bit ordinary trancer.

Not too bad. Overall, a decent trancer. I won't download it because I'm already having disk space troubles on my hard drive . If I had the space, this would go on my playlist.

However, I agree with Mr. Mystery that the delay used on the vocals sounds wrong. I'd say that it really muddies the rest of the music up. I also would inject some personal opinion to say that I don't like the Kick at 6:00; it's too extended. Past 6:28, the whole song seems to lose it's verve, and it reduces it to more of just a sit-at-my-desk-with-it-in-the-background kind of song. Lastly, the fill at 8:19 or so is awkward and kind of distracting.

Still, I like it. I could picture it on my playlist.

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Originally posted by Jay M Heard this sound, heard that sound. Could use more detail to keep me awake.

i know.. but i really don't see anything wrong with that... you can't always make something "new"..

and there is many people that like the sound.. that's why it's been used so many times.

but thank's for the comments all

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Hey Dantheman, sorry it took so long to reply, but here we are - Intro melody is cool as fook. Main melody is quality. Vocals are bleh - so glad you are doing an instumental version of this, because I think the vocals are the only part of the track I don't like.

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex Lastly, the fill at 8:19 or so is awkward and kind of distracting.

Dan, don't you dare be taking that out for the instrumental version. It has to stay!!

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I really like the melodies you've put in this, but... it needs some significant mastering. It's too soft, and I think the eq is a little too flat. Also, make the bass or bass drum (the main beat, you know) a little more punchy (not necessarily more loud in comparison with the rest of the song). It doesn't stand out as much as I would like. Maybe some compression on the kick would do the job. Anyways, I'm no pro, so no need to rely on what I've said. Good job.

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can't get it for som reason..
very intent to listen to it though as the lsat thing i heard of yours was really old and promising

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Originally posted by Lew.D can't get it for som reason.. very intent to listen to it though as the lsat thing i heard of yours was really old and promising

baaaah.. the bandwidth exceeded :/

but i have fixed a BACKUP LINK


jwear2004: thank's
and as i have said.. it's still unmastered

Fundamental: thank's joe
i will keep the sound just for you.. hehe

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Seems like it's becoming a very good remix mate! It didn't bore me really, perhaps some fx here and there wouldn't hurt though.

I really like that 'little' synth that plays in the background for 75% of the track, is it a melody from the original? Cause I can't remember.

Cheers,
Wim

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The bass on this track is mint man! The kick is good aswell , wouldnt mind a few more fx @ start, thats from a listening point of view, in a club it would matter in the slightest. Percs flow really well the bass, though i think the bass could be turned up a little bit. Ohhh nice synth in the build up man! This is really good work. Although when the vocal plays i hear disortion, could be my headphones.

Yeah this is a very good remix, i enjoyed it alot!

Alex

thank's for the comments

wim: the mel come's from the original.. but don't know how much it's in the original since i haven't heard it.. heh

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