Bass sounds a bit... undefined, and the kick is just unprocessed. Could use a tail IMO.
Percs are very nice. Hm not pretty much is happening, maybe I have difficulties with the music style. i like the break tho. Uhu very lethal industry indeed? Amusing

Not bad in quality, not really my style.

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cheers Jay M

Maybe its a matter of taste. I didnt try and aim to please pure trance fans with this, it was just an experiment!

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Downloading now Al m8,

will post lata

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I really like this one mate, love the little break at 2:18, fantastic stuff!

Someone said that the BD could do with a longer release, I feel the same, but dont add too much or it'll mud up the bass. The bass itself does feel a little dry too, seems too "static" maybe a slight, and only a slight, distortion and open the release a tad too.

The percs are top notch, although sometimes they could do with a bit more variations in places...

Overall mate, work on it a bit more and you got a stomper on your hands,

Shep

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right. comments from the word go

-the kick is way too thin, phatten that shit up
-like the mauro picotto perc sample robbed what is it..hong kong?
-into main percs, overall i feel a lack of release on stuff, things just "stop"...they need to flow more into each other
-the actual percs are good i like them, techy, but they are over-riding the bass....get that bass back up
-nice synth break with the 1/4s like it
-once again more nice intro synths and fx coming...the bass and kick is really lacking tho...u gotta WHACK up that kick and bass man,dominate that track!
-haha the lead is ridiculously like lethal industry
-the delay/flange/pitch fx are a bit strange and really made me lose where the track was, but it kicked back in nice.
-the riff is really not strong enough to hold the track...what is is-3 notes> u gotta be more creative with that riff. the track would improve 100% if the riff could hold interest
-and now it just changed into a hard house tune...definately not needed....hoovers yuck no thanks


overall a good effort and good concept but i really didnt enjoy when the track turned into a hardhouse mashup...that hoover was awful sry


this could be made into a great tune if u deleted some uneccesarry percs,synths,fattened the kick, sorted the bass and made the riff more interesting. thats all it needs.

try not to complicate things....keep it simple-but make sure the simple is good

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Cheers John + Shep, ill make some changes once i get my ill pc back

John: That loop isnt actually from picotto its just a few multi samps, the only sampled loop in there is from an Antiloop tune. Ill change the hoovers then, and get rid of the hoover i was gonna try something new, but ill slap the back of my hand if it sounds like hard house cus i hate the stuff V2 maybe done when i get back from my holiday.

Thanks again
Alex