i really like this one, could you please post the full thing when it's finished (if it isn't already). technically seems open to improvement, try the tips other ppl posted already, but the atmosphere and mood on this is outstanding.

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The guitar sounds very cheap. Trow it out.
I Like your pads a lot, they give a nice atmosphere to te track. But i don't like the open hihat, it's to loud.
The bass is nice but the kick is to soft.

Nice track but there something missing to make your song special (nice stab / melody / vocal or something like that).

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I'm not throwing the guitar out. Its a stayer..

I've been trying to figure out a melody or riff (vocals are out of question at the moment, as I can't sing or know anyone who is decent and I don't have the equipment for recording them) that would fit the mood of the track, but so far I've failed..

i like your intro pad a lot,a nd the guitar. maybe you could make the kick just a little bit louder though =). the overall atmosphere you create is amazing htough i really like it. that hi hat that comes in around 240 is too loud i think. nice track you got here, i would like to hear the full thing. try getting a counter melody in there too, another one and expand the guitar melody too =) good work

Everything what should be changed is already mentioned. Maybe try to put in some soft delayed panned percussion in stead of the clap.

Sounds promising. Keep up m8!

-Jay

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Ok.

Thank you for your feedback.

Put the "full" version for download (see the first post), though I feel it is not the final version.
Cause got this feeling that something is missing.

Matti, thats a huge improvment from the earlier version
Like others have said, the pads sound great, they create a perfect atmosphere for the track. kicks are alot better this time around and the tribalish drums in the back round sound pretty nice also. but i think in the beginning the hi's sounds a bit out of place almost. over all it is a nice mood setting track, and a large improvment since the previous version. keep up the good work mate.

Me like!
Everything there's to be said has already been said.
One thing though. Those pads(?) busting in and out of the track are sometimes a little off-beat i think. The (Pliddi-plit-pliddi-plit) thingie. Nice pads, nice bass

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