thanx for ur feedback)
Does smb think that the main melody is weak??

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Originally posted by Leonid Rudenko thanx for ur feedback) Does smb think that the main melody is weak??

I would comment that it doesn't sound very natural or flowing, it sounds quite forced if that makes sense.

Otherwise this track is better than 99.9% posted on this forum, bar the main melody it's hard to fault. Nice one.

Main melody doesn't hook me really, the whole track doesn't. I like the overall sound, quality is just great. Inspires me. Sounds are pretty decent, and very Leonid Rudenko hehe. It resembles "One Minute.." so much that it's more of an effort to extend the success of the sounds.. though I think sound quality is better in this one.

I'd bring some more new ideas to the track. Other than that.. mint mint mint stuff!

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Yeah, this is unsurprisingly good. The tune sounds very "One Minute"-ish, but if you were trying to repeat that style you did a good job! As someone already said, this would make a superb b-side for "One Minute Of Happiness"!

So to recap, the percs and bass are superb. Some great ideas used here. The melody works ok, but it doesn't really catch me. Still there are so many other great elements in this.

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i like it less than 1 minute, cause i'd rather you develop your techier side than the melodic one and just produce a track that uncovers all the full potential to that killer bass of yours

however, quality is awesome, to my opinion

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THanx for ur replyes.In fact i wanted to make it as a follow-up to 1 min of happines)Currenly i'm working on a track without any melodys.
Now i think that i will change the melody in this track.

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No no no no don't do that. Melody is great. Without it it will be not the same. Dont change the melody it's realy cool

wow i love this melody!!! its really cleverly done!!! sounds well made to. in the last production.. i dont know if u noticed.. but the kick was panned relaly badly to the left lol. i only know this coz i nearly played it in a set, but then realised the stereo image was all over the place. that might be worth looking at. but this sounds awsome as hell. really like it. lovely break

Keep it up

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THanx for ur support...As for me i like my melody too naturally.But i don;t know why it's impossible to sign my productions.Maybe smth wrong with ma tracks?

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it might be because you need to spend more time getting the mixing and panning, eqing... all that.. a bit better. like i said, in the old track, one minute of happiness, the kick was panned hard to the left, so i coulnt even play it in my set. spend time looking at your tracks in wave editors so u can see where something is too loud and where something is panned to hard. just things like that. but just keep firing tracks at labels, alot of them are fussy! eventuall ull get somewhere

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In fact nobody who listened to my old track mentioned that the bassdrum is panned hard to left.Even i can't hear it!I use KRK V8 monitors so i think it's not a prob of ma speakers)))I have replys form lables that ma tunes a super but there is a lack of catching melody.So i guess it's the point.

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hehe. i disagree with that, the melodies in your tracks are AWSOME. but check out 1 minute of happiness in a wave editor. maybe i have a fucked version, but either just the kick is panned to the left, or the whole track is, take a look. its easy to fix of course :P

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