thanks everyone, i used some of the tips , i finished it now and Ron has the full

I think the bass is fine, didn't notice it was off.

Break is long, but i don't see why that should be a problem.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Well Fahad, as you know, I love this track.

The break is too long for a live audience waiting to dance their asses off but great for someone chilling at home.

Great work and keep it up, you continue to get better.

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Really liked your production

i think this tune is a killer track

i hope u'll have a deal with labels

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Originally posted by Anaconda Really liked your production i think this tune is a killer track i hope u'll have a deal with labels

Thanks

meanwhile it is finished, and Ron (Sunquest) has it, will see how it goes.

If you need review or help, just pm me .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

wouldnt mind getting this off ron...

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Originally posted by jcosgrove wouldnt mind getting this off ron...

If you want i could give it to you my self, just pm me how or wait for Ron .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

I really like your remix, Fahad, if you can post the full when finished, i'd be glad! Lovely progressive influences, fit well!

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this is sounding good, i like the bassline, becuase its sort of subtle, imo. good sfx. i like the melody here in the first breakdown. kind of simple but good. 1 minute, i like the pads, they sound really spacey, are you using a phaser? i like the echoy synths, good panning. holy shit, this pad at 130 is pretty sick. as well as that new melody synth. the melodies combine together seamlessly, that is excellent work. yea this is quality stuff, send it to labels, i havent heard his original one, but send it with that one too. quality stuff.

thank you both

Yes that sweepy spacy panned sound has a phaser i think.
That sweepy pad starts really early in the song at the 16th bar it starts fading in. When i finished it, Ron wanted something extra that makes it more proggy lets say. Hehe compliments to Ron for the melodies .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

I like it!
No complains.
Just make a club mix with a shorter break.

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