hey wow I really like this... the production isn't spot on IMO... I think some sounds can be strengthened and/or replaced with some less cheesey ones, but who cares really... just get an engineer to mix this down and send it off to the labels... like everyone else said... lots of potential here.

I agree with John... after the break try putting some elements that will add novelty to the track... maybe an unexpected chord change... or a key change.. with a sweet piano riff. for ideas sake

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Originally posted by gerrycueto hey wow I really like this... the production isn't spot on IMO... I think some sounds can be strengthened and/or replaced with some less cheesey ones, but who cares really... just get an engineer to mix this down and send it off to the labels... like everyone else said... lots of potential here. I agree with John... after the break try putting some elements that will add novelty to the track... maybe an unexpected chord change... or a key change.. with a sweet piano riff. for ideas sake

Coolio, Thanks for the feedback, always appreciated

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finally got it finished and we're happy with the final outcome....

sample below, any feedback again is always appreciated

Steve Callaghan vs Frase - The Element (Updated)

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nice fx going on in the track...
melody sounds cool...
that roll at the end of the break is very powerful..i like that...
dont have much to say to it anymore...good work, dude!

hey it's good now... very dreamy... might have a little too much lowmids here in these speakers... but I haven't checked it on others to tell... but sounds much better! It has that Vadim Zhukov feel to it

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Wow guys, thanks for the feedback! An honour to be said that it compares to a signed artist!!

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Wow this tune is really sweeeet!! love it. Can't believe i missed this. Sending you a pm.

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Track sounds like its recorded in a hollow tube o something...to be honest. I like some of the synths and melodie. It does have some potential but especially the structure of the track and the sound quality is not very good. Track lacks bass and as i said...way to much reverb i think.

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sounds nice.. could really need a submelodie thou caus now it sounds really thinn

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Nice melody, nice bass (but add some low), nice fx, a lot of nice things here.
Percs are a bit sharp i guess.. And maybe the kick can use some more punch. Is there a lot of reverb on the pads?

An extra guitar (or so) as lead will hold my attention after the break, give it a try!

Good work.
-Jay

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Hey guys, didnt see this topic brought up again, but what you're hearing is not the final version

We finished the final version bout 2-3 weeks ago now and we're loving the standard, much crisper sound we've got than previous efforts! Got playlisted by a couple of DJ's so we're happy

Heres a sample of it

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Nice atmosphere, but the lead synth is too "basic", too loud and too repetative.. Sounds like a good production, but id like to hear this with another lead sound.. try layering a few sounds with different synthesis and effects.. then try to morph them with eq / volume automation.. then the lead would keep interest even though it is melodically very repetative..

- J.

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