piano is very cool, but i'm not feeling that generic saw lead (too overdone in a lot of songs, sounds a little unoriginal)

most other elements of the song sound fine


free sex was horrible, i hate you please die

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it all sounded nice. i think the only part that didnt flow right was the breakbeat part. the kick didnt have the flow with the song, maybe too much break in between some of the kicks. otherwise it was very nice to the ears. ejoyed.

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hey man i know u want peeps to listen to ur songs and stuff but quit postin stuff just to get ur thread to the top of the page. peeps will check out ur song if they want to. theres alot of songs being posted here so u just have to be patient.

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Originally posted by Dj Pyster This thread is great, lol... ur a musical genius, only if Beethoven thought of this idea

I'm sorry, but I just found this too appalling to ignore. Beethoven's music as well as most classical compositions are infinitely more complex and musical than any electronic dance music. End of story. There is no debate. If Beethoven were alive, he would punch you in the face and then take a shit on you.

As for this track, I greatly enjoy the percussion. I think the riffs before the build are a bit cheesey. The build is totally a tease! Although I'm really not a huge trance fan anymore, I thought that this track really accomplished what trance is supposed to be: interesting, well produced, and dance-able.

Hey I noticed I havent reviewed this proper yet. That this is my second reply does not mean tho I want your free sex for the second time.

Nice start with a good kick and percussion.
Bass is a bit too wet and needs more clarity.
Synth coming is pretty cheesy. Altogether it's a bit of a blur.
Piano is cut from a lot of sides, makes it ugly imo.
Melody coming in break: Du Fromage, not really my style. I think a breakbeat doesn't really fit this style, but that's taste i gues..

Mainpart now. The basic elements are there, but it doesn't grab me at all. Eq needs some work as well. A lot of things are interfering with each other.

I hope the next is better..
-Jay

ps: jeez dude stop being Mister Bump.

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nice feedback, Jay.. best I've gotten yet

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Last edited by alanzo on Jan-28-2005 at 14:36

i bet those two chicks inspired you with creating this track, its as lovely as they are... no seriously, i really like the fatness...

ok, now really serious, i think the track is awesome, very nice melody, all very profesional etc etc etc etc etc, you should be proud of it. coulnt find any weak points

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hmm its downloading now ill review later

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yes i agree with nic

i think it will take at least nother 30 yrs before hes beethoven.

But anywayz...glad to see ur finally making something worth turnin up the volume on Alanzo...reminds me of something...but none the less its an awesome tune bro...i'd ask Dj Ampz to put it on his show

8/10 from me

sebasano

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Originally posted by djdustx i think it will take at least nother 30 yrs before hes beethoven.

I'm working on that Beethoven thing. Preferrably Bach, though

I'm going to try my hands at a piano piece (only piano) this weekend if I find a few hours to myself.

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if u can create more of these type of tracks

i'd prefer u stick at being Alanzo

Sebasano