yeah... change the structure of where the melodies go... have one in this part... the other in that part... that way you can hear the melodies and it won't sound like a rush of noise

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* This subtle intro melody rocks
* Good strings
* Again, you have used plenty of sounds to good effect, they don't conflict eachother, they blend very well
* The only downer is the weak kick, raise its volume

All in all a great track

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Originally posted by Peter K * This subtle intro melody rocks * Good strings * Again, you have used plenty of sounds to good effect, they don't conflict eachother, they blend very well * The only downer is the weak kick, raise its volume All in all a great track

thanks Peter

i'm glad you like it, anyway, i might take some changes in the structure as Gerry advised,

any other comments?

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I pretty much like the idea behind this one. Quality is not bad, but there's just a few things which catch my attention..
The lower frequencies need more power. Kick and bass are hard to disinguish in the violence of the synths. Volume boost can do a lot.
Now the synths sounds aren't the best chosen i think. There's a lot of delay on them which makes this a bit of a blurr. Maybe there's a bit too much high on them too. Eq-ing helps a lot I think.
Percussion and fx I like in this one. Put some attention to this one Peter, could become a splendid track!

I hope I help you out a bit with the comments

-Jay

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I like that blend of melodies...
The synths themself sound awesome.
Great stuff man!
Nice hihats.
The kick is too low and you need to make the bass louder.
Nice fxes.
woww great buildup...
dmm i like this!
4.9/5

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