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Last edited by davidemonin on Mar-06-2005 at 10:52

Hey man: Cool melodic/atmospheric ideas in this, but it could use a better kick and bassline. For the kick try to create/find something somewhat more punchy/sharper. Also still need to work the mastering/eq/levels a little.
With a better kick ,like said, and edgier basslines, this could be a real nice tunes. Keep it up

BTW, i think i am maybe going to play your tune "Imnonimato" on my next show

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percs + bass need work. as does the hi arpeg style synth, it sounds very software. melody has the potential to be very nice if a bit more work is put into this

keep at it

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Starts of pretty promising but the bass coming there is really disappointing me. Other leads synths are very thin as well.
I'm not too fond of the chord progression too.
I do like the lead thingy showing up in the break.. but it leaves now without any reason.
The break leads to nowhere, this needs some finishing.
The main part with that lead thing back in sounds better.

Overall this has some good potential, but phatten up the synths and the hats and give it somewhat more theme! Nice fx, decent eq-ing, enough synths to fill, buildup is ok, except for after the break, needs a lead there.

I'd say give it just a little more attention!
-Jay

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hey Krivi

Nice atmosphere you create with the percs at the start - but the bass disappoints me a bit - you need it wayyyy stronger and more 'in your face'...maybe change the arrangement around a bit.
I like the wee melody that comes in at about 2.50/30 minutes, maybe fatten up that synth and raise its volume, bit more feed/reverb.
The pads are a bit 'static' (during the main part), maybe bring a bit of variation.
BUt this is a very listenable tune Krivi, I like the sort of chilled out melody.
So summary-

Improve bass and pads

Thats it

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oh and i think i hear pads and bass from Albino??

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no it's not albino ...
i am working on bass,pads and improving overall tune

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