ok good bass line good sounds. Heres some things I would change on the High end of the Pluck Synth id raise it a couple more decibles to make it brighter to give it a bit more of punch to it. Seems to be missing a tad bit of atmosphere not much. Overall good job mate keep up the good work.

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I think you should work on the bass a little bit more.
Nice flute there I think you should cut a lil bit from its highs.
Good fxes.
The lead is ok.
I would like to see more elements on this one.

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Quite good for a FL track this. I love the synth man, vocals are really nice at the level they are as well. Bass shift is quality and the build is gourgeous.

Try variating you're percussion more though otherwise, cant fault it.

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Thanks guys!

I'll have a look and see if I should apply some of your suggestions.

Cheers.

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I dislike that saw synth.

Lacks delay and it seems so unpleasent in the mix. The whole sound doesn't suit the picture for my feel.

The gated sound is really nice, i dislike the chord progression, it didn't went where i hoped to.

Bass is great.

Melody is not my type of thing anymore.

flute is nice.

thats all

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Sounds are nice but I don't like the reverb at al...However it is not so bad set up
What I really like is the synth...
2:42 - I'd add sth to it, maybe some pad and second melody Dor me it's quite monotonous...
There comes nice flute I like it..hehe
But after 2-3 minutes I expected some trance, energy melody
However this track is on the high level...
Greets

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I like the synth you've got going for the lead.

The flute's cool.

For some reason though, I'm not feeling a lot of energy earlier in the sample. It picks up a bit around the time the pad comes in, but it's still kind of lacklustre. I think it's because of the chord progression, as Massive was saying.

Melody-issues are common with my tracks hehe, oh well.

Thanks for the comments guys!

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very nice mate, i like your works alot. the drive is great in this one, tight groove ! your bassline is great.

i'm not found of the melodies only my taste ^^


very good percwork too.

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Hey Mate,

Just listened to your track. Really like the bassdrive and the percs, sounds very nice. The bass really pulsates underneath the track. All the other percussions in the track are nice as well.

Melodywise this track is not really intresting though. It is very repetitive, because the build up and lead are pretty much the same. You are not working towards a specific break in the song, you just keep doing the same and the same. It is as if you started playing with a melody and just kept on going and going.

The sublead, the sort of flutish sound you use is totally out of place in this big energizer of a track. It gives the track a cheap sort of sound which does not fit.

Overall the track does have a good drive but it just can't inspire to listen melody wise.


Keep it up mate!

Cheers,

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hey jay!

this is some excellent stuff! i guess it´s the best yarune single that i´ve heard so far! i also agree about the bass! sounds really cool!
the mellows are well done...
my fav.part is the quite quiet part in the break! i wish it would be longer...but it works like this, aswell..
sound quality and mastering is really pro, as mentioned above!

great track!

melody not hitting the spot... could be trippier... well mastered though...

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