Amen for that massive, I just wanna get my money back, someone promised me da shit of a Trance Track and I lost my precious bandwitch with this :P, seriously, dont post lame threads or u are going to get lame replys, the piano is the only part I liked, u need to work a lot more the slayer, sounds way plane dude, not wanted to be mean .
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ooooh
got dissed



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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Amen for that massive, I just wanna get my money back, someone promised me da shit of a Trance Track and I lost my precious bandwitch with this :P, seriously, dont post lame threads or u are going to get lame replys, the piano is the only part I liked, u need to work a lot more the slayer, sounds way plane dude, not wanted to be mean . Kopi =o.

The point of this is just the naming of your threads and there must be a rule for this to give every thread a fair chance and to give this part of the forum a better look.

It's been bothering me for quite some time that the bad and sometimes arrgant naming of threads really gives a bad taste to the tunes inside them. Be wise and don't tell us you have a killer track while it's total crap.

Although that's not fully the case here, as Adambomb is telling no lie about this record company deal .. but it must not be in the name of the thread because of expectations people have and are misled by this bad chosen name.


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Ok I started a thread on this, please join the discussion on naming of threads in this thread

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Originally posted by Jay M The point of this is just the naming of your threads and there must be a rule for this to give every thread a fair chance and to give this part of the forum a better look. It's been bothering me for quite some time that the bad and sometimes arrgant naming of threads really gives a bad taste to the tunes inside them. Be wise and don't tell us you have a killer track while it's total crap. Although that's not fully the case here, as Adambomb is telling no lie about this record company deal .. but it must not be in the name of the thread because of expectations people have and are misled by this bad chosen name. *edit* Ok I started a thread on this, please join the discussion on naming of threads in this thread

Prolly if this would be a dating site, or sort of, you could do it, and u would get replys like:

OMG congratulations bro!
Awesome mate simply awesome!
U are da man!

BUT, u are in TA, where u will look noob claiming u have a super hit, the part where u are giving copys for free is pretty tender actually *YAY*.


The peep that post tracks at TA it's used to listen to some really amazing tracks here usually, so when someone comes and claims he, she has da bomb and the track it's pretty average, well, u know what hapenns :P:
I would like o apologise if I sounded too grouchy or mean with my last post, but dude, u should come here more often and to check out the great stuff some peep post here with a simply:

Hey, I am working on this track, tell em what ya think .

Anyway, who am I to critiquise, I dont even Produce Trance, lol ... :P Good Luck with ur Music .

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Hey. I just listened to the song. I'm not going to bother posting a review on this since u didnt bother asking for one. My personal opinion on this track isnt all that high, mainly because of your hype over the song. This track honestly sounds like something I produced 3 to 4 years ago. Now, I'm not trying to diss you but I find it unfortunate that the label signed you, what im guessing, early in your composing career. I'm afraid they have partially ruined your future potential at progressing and that youll continue to try to make similar music. It really isnt that bad, but trust me when I say, progress with your sound. If you dont, you will find it very hard to get signed and if this release doesnt sell well through this label who signed you, they most likely arent going to invest any more money in having your music.

If you get nothign else from this post though, understand this; dont let labels sign everything you produce. You should post it here, have it reviewed by those of us that have been composing for a long time and/or are employees at labels; we do exist on this forum . Please though, dont think I'm typing this to bash you here. You do have some decent sounds in your song. Its nothing I havent heard or produced before myself, but that means you are on the right track for a better sound. Keep it up and you might end up in a better label but until you have a post from someone on this forum saying its gonna be a smash hit, dont expect it to be .

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Yeah, when I read that it was signed by a label, I felt a deja-vu coming, hehe. I usually get interested by threads with humble titles like "something I'm working on...need opinions". Usually, it's a professional sounding track with a lot of potential. I made the exception with this one. I barely produce but I can say, my early stuff two years ago had more life than this track. Not to be rude...just constructive criti-whatever. =oP

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Prolly if this would be a dating site, or sort of, you could do it, and u would get replys like: OMG congratulations bro! Awesome mate simply awesome! U are da man! BUT, u are in TA, where u will look noob claiming u have a super hit, the part where u are giving copys for free is pretty tender actually *YAY*. The peep that post tracks at TA it's used to listen to some really amazing tracks here usually, so when someone comes and claims he, she has da bomb and the track it's pretty average, well, u know what hapenns :P: I would like o apologise if I sounded too grouchy or mean with my last post, but dude, u should come here more often and to check out the great stuff some peep post here with a simply: Hey, I am working on this track, tell em what ya think . Anyway, who am I to critiquise, I dont even Produce Trance, lol ... :P Good Luck with ur Music . Kopi =o.

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sorry if I dissapointed some of you. I personally don't believe this track is a "super hit." Everyone here is actually a lot nicer than some other trance forums that commented on the track, lol Thanks for at least being happy for me I apologize for drawing too much attention from the thread title. I was just stating what I felt (I was excited. It's like when you get some new toy and you want to call your friends up so you can all play with it) and I didn't mean to hog the forum. I agree that many other artists on here deserve a lot more replies and feedback than I do. I was just excited that I finally got one of my songs published. I was in no way trying to act better than anyone.

One thing I want to make clear is that I am not signed to the label. I won a contest that they had to be on their trance compilation. Just that song will be on it and I am not even getting paid for it. The two free copies that I am giving away will come out of my own pocket. I believe in giving music to people for free that enjoy it but I also believe that if you want to make a career out of music production, that promotion and being signed to a label is neccessary. I support lables that are honest and want to support artists and I also support the listener.

This wasn't meant to be a pure trance song and the part that some people said was original was the ending in that clip. The entire song isn't posted. The whole thing is actually 12:08 and the place I uploaded it wouldn't let me give the whole version cause it was so long. On the full chorus it uses every frequency you can imagine. This part of the song is very minimal because it is supposed to be a break from the psycho/high energy chorus. The mastered version also has the kick completely replaced, the song is stereo enhanced, and other tricks were done to the final version so don't think it will sound poorly mastered. If you heard the whole song, you would be able to understand the structure; it's not like most songs.

If you listened to any of the other songs on there, they are about 2-3 years old and I agree with what was said about the production quality. I now have NI Komplete2, high-end VSTs, real orchestra samples, and will be switching to cubase SX3 soon while still using FLstudio 5. So you can imagine how they will sound when they are completed... much better... I'm always growing in my production quality too.

This track, "free reign," was supposed to bring back some of that old school rave sound that I miss and a mix of other genres. What genre would you classify it as? maybe I should lean more towards the hardcore, EBM, industrial genres. I like mixing different types though and trying to come up with something knew. I don't always like modeling after the same things that have already been made. I am still searching and trying to find "my sound" if you know what I mean.

Well, hopefully someone enjoyed it and I really appreciate the feedback! I like people who are honest! I'm always looking to see ways to improve. Hopefully I can post another song in a few months that most of you can enjoy

thanks again for all the advice!! and by all means, review! I need all the feedback I can get to become better so I can make songs that you guys like and can enjoy! I enjoy making music for people

Last edited by Adambomb337 on Jun-13-2005 at 08:17

nhibberd, thanks I'm glad you liked the melody. I enjoyed your songs I don't usually like rap, but it was cool hearing it in dutch

Takkra, the track was accepted by lowroof records (http://www.lowroof.nl/). The subdivision trance line is called "deepsink." The trance compilation that the song will be on is called "osmotic pressure." There are a lot of much more experienced producers on there than me that I'm sure you would all enjoy.

Kenidel Lopez, that's cool you listen to this type of genre! I'd like to listen to some of your tracks. Thanks for your encouragement

kopi_luwak, I think you heard the wrong song cause I'm pretty sure the slayer isn't in that old version that is posted. The song I was talking about is not the one that starts playing on http://www.myspace.com/kingdomage "battle realms" is like 3 years old and is being completely re-done.
It's ok, no need to apologize. I totally know what you mean. When I first posted about the track, the title was something like you stated.
I still think I'm a newb and have a ways to go. I'm just glad I'm at a point now where some songs I make can be enjoyed by other people.

IDarkISwordI, I would enjoy a review by you I don't feel dissed. Thanks for the feedback you've given already!! I really appreciate that kind of concern you've shown and watching my back!! I will definately continue to post songs here to be reviewed. Everyone is very nice here compared to a lot of other forums

RiCo, i accept all constructive criticism, especially if it is negative because that means I can improve on something and get better! thanks

Last edited by Adambomb337 on Jul-19-2005 at 11:12

Hey man, sorry for all the shit, honestly ur track it's pretty good, hehehe, damn, I am an ass sometimes, but u acted cool at the end .
Good attitude, and some work more and u will be on the top soon .
Kopi =O.

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