Hi Allen&Bream, Thankyou for your feedback, and the comments .
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Originally posted by Allen&Bream Jeeze, you make like 3 songs a day
<--- LMFAO.
Hi PDM, Thankyou for your feedback, its good to hear people respecting my work,
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Originally posted by PDM Two Thumbs Up! I'll be spinning this if you don't mind.
<--- No problems, this track is free for use by anyone.
Terry.
Jul-01-2005 10:02
RobertB
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Nitra, Slovakia
this sounds good, some good ideas.. but some good mastering needed.. the rythm and stuff is too loud.. this has no drive mate.. make it more powerfull if you know what I think..
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Jul-01-2005 12:59
moolow
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: sweden
This could be really good!
Maybe u could synchronize the sounds a little. (The kick is to loud) Then u have a perfect remix
The bass is warm, I like that. Kick is really punchy, but I don't think I like the overall sound of it too much. percs are clean and crisp.. but too standard to me. Arp thingy is ok. I'm pretty much waiting for the next thing to happen now at 2:45, I think the buildup could use more elements. Lead sounds are nothing new, I think I heard them too much.
There's a lot of tiny things I'd just change in this track. I like the clean sound of it, but the buildup needs more variety, overall there must be more elements in it and additional fx. I'm missing all the tiny details. And you should IMO step of the standard synth sounds.
Hi Thanks for all the feedback, im moving tomorrow so i probablies wont be on the net for a while but i will return with some new stuff when i get sorted. Thankyou Again.
Terry.
Jul-03-2005 10:15
gerrycueto
heh
Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
dono about the kick being powerful, but it is very bright... which isn't a bad thing... it could be powerful tho... if there was a bassey kick layered under it. and the kick could be EQed better... sounds somewaht distracting from the rest of the mix... it sounds more like beating a book against a table, than a kick. I'm not a big fan of the piano melody, since it sounds random and lacks direction, that makes it hard to remember... you want to make your melodies memorable especially if you want people to go home from the club and be able to sing the melody to ID the track.
the bassline is also very quiet... maybe some more drive in the bassline.. try putting a smooth distortion and boosting the lows on it... overall the track sounds pretty plastic... it needs some evil sounds because the sound so far is too clean.. making it rather cheesey sounding... especially with a melody this dark you've gotta have some evil synthesis going on and dark sounds in general.. like an acidline that ripps through the track. This is where distortion can be your friend (distortion effects, NOT distortion as making your track clip)
The lead also needs attention... ti's not very phat and it's not in your face, rather plastic and cheesey... not only that it sounds in the background... you would expect the mainlead to take the foreground of the mix. Good ending effects!
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